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*growls dangerously while twitching* Okay...Now I never EVER EVER flame anyone...except people who put things in the WRONG catergory...there is a Hetro section back in the menus...quite frankly...I have no idea what HET is doing in the YAOI section GO POST IT SOMEWHERE ELSE!!! I'm sorry Bakurasgirl but seriously...it's disturbing...think of it as a polite warning...please replace this story in the right section..no offense or anything

EWEEEE....that was grossss! I loved it! You did a wonderful job describing Ravana's death and that nasty rotten wound. I really think we need to find out why Yami is such a prick, I mean...wow. *shakes head*

Damn! Anubis needs to die a gory nasty death, he's so mean! I wish Aten would stick that sick fuck with his sword!

I'm hooked with this fanfic, please update soon before I explode >.< Oh yes.. I meant a pretty please in there by the way :D

yami, yami , yami, don not shed the blood of innocents, it will be your undoing,
um interesting fif, gory tragic and strange, but good

just read this, hmmm interesting take on the whole dark yami theme. anubis cruel, his wife, a bitch, yami in this one, is an asshole, sorry but as much as i like him, in thi one he is DARK, REAL DARK. killing children, not called for. but at least veria seth and mariks wife showed some human kindness , good for them, hurray, i hope anubis gets his just deserts , interesting fic there, and update soon?

The Thief King had removed his clothes!
LOL just to add insult to injury huh?

“A common girl?! A boy from what family? I can’t make it out!”
Mnya, sucks to be you, Pointy Hair

With a sad look he waved goodbye to them.
Aten sniffled. “Hamadi…..”
Oooo you know that's a permanent good-bye

The wall suddenly began to reveal an image of Hamadi kneeling with his arms crossed in front of his chest.
Below read the inscription: The Helpless Child.
Okay, Hamadi died and all and that's bad, but I have to say one thing about the sealing in the wall: COOL!!

Aria was backing up and didn’t look where she was going. Aten knocked Aria into the tub of water.
*laughs*

Anubis approached the city gate where the hungry dogs were already fighting over the scraps of food tossed into the gutter.
“Here’s more meat, pooches,” Anubis called as the foaming, snarling dogs caught eye of their feast.
Ewwww. That's just nashtay!

“I have found a way to become immortal and have ultimate power over the people of Egypt…and the known world.”
*snorts* Crazy much?

“Nobody will stop me from getting the power that I deserve!”
Oh yeah... he's gone completely nutters...

Aria nodded. “I slept with all the mommies! It was fun!”
*laughs* Bet Seth would have liked it more....

Butcher of Cairo, huh? It fits.

Seth was snapped from his thoughts as he saw Yami grab Rayna and pull her to her feet. He removed a dagger from his belt and Seth’s heart froze.
“NO! SHE MAY BEAR YOUR HEIR!”
Oy, took you long enough to react.

" I would bring him into my harem to stay with my children, but, if I ever
have Aten in here, Yami would have his hands on him in no time. Yami
favors boys his age. He favors their innocence. "
Ohhhh yeah... that's why Seth never took the boy in.

"MY LAW IS ABOSOLUTE! MY POWER IS UNMATCHED BY THE GODS! I AM RA!"
*snorts* Ehhh, bite me Starfish Head.

Seth narrowed his eyes at the cheering tyrant.
Someday….Yami had to be stopped.
Now would be nice.

“There will be one rule of this bed, Aria: You will not kick your feet.”
“Why?”
Seth bit his lip. “It would hurt me….alot.”
*falls over laughing* Yeah, you might bruise the Priestly Jewels.

Sheesh, the Pharaoh friggin' scares the crap out of me! What a *insert long string of curses*!
Bakura...damn! That poor guy! I hope he eventually gets to rape the bloody hell out of Yami.

WOW!!! What a story! It's very intresting though. I'm eager to keep reading so please update it!!!