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for Return To Me *completed*

by Wicabeth

schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funny chapter. It really did remind me of Shadow Magic Gone Wrong. When Yami called Yugi Udi, I wondered if you read it.
This is really wonderful, poor Yugi is so embarrassed and Yami so innocent. So cute.
person tavia454
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is just the cutest story I've read! Please tell me you have other ones!
person Luciana
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is 'pu'erdy?
person RandomPerson
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahahahaha....that was hilarious! It's good that made you made it realistic by putting in all, and I do mean ALL, the details about growing up. Very original and funny. I've read some of your other stuff too. You're a very good writer!
person RayeMoon
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Wicabeth, it's me! I just got around to reading this fic. Gotta tell you, I was a little worried at first. Baby Yami was a little scary, but a most interesting idea. As for the end, love it. Not to mention Yugi getting his way with Yami, even if you didn't write it word for word. Having the boys switch back and forth is far more interesting than a completely dominant Yami/submissive Yugi. If you read this before Yugi's Conquests Part Four, be sure to read the author's note! I'll read more of your stuff, too. Later!
person Arainaina
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was very good
person yami nefertira
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

this is so sweet, funny, touching and very hot and steamy in the third chapter, well done. WAFF and yaoi? well done. encore.
please write more stories , you are a good writer.
person anon
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um, funny twist there, im glad that it worked out in the end, im blushing here. nice work, is there a sequal, yami with a mischieveous streak hmmm, interesting, good fanfic
person Nekura
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*high* I LOVED IT!!! So sweeeeeeeeeeet!!! x3 This gotta be my fav fanfic of aaaaall times! Yugi+Yami FOREVER!!!!! x3
person Yamima
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BABY YAMI IS SOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE! Piss off Yugi I want to hold him...I didn't mean it, I want to hold you too! (Cradling the boys)