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for The Golden Dance

by tsutsuji

person ChibiRinni
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am sooooo glad you finally updated! I thought this story died! T.T BUT IT LIVES!! Thank you sooo much for picking it back up and for the great chapters I have been reading. I await the next chapter! I only hope Seth and Bakura don't kill each other! XD See you soon! BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
person Sekre
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, interesting story you got here. It is definitely different then the other AE fics around here (though they are sadly sparse). I loooove Jou/Seto and Ryou/Baku, my favorite YGO couples, so naturally I looove your fic. The lemon between Seth and Jou was hot and I love how Bakura was being all protective of Ryou when he possessed his body and talked to theif bak. I'm not really a fan of Set/Bak, but I'm still curious about their relationship, whether it will work out or if Jun (ahh can't spell the name) became a bigger part of Seth's heart (of course being the big SJ fan, I'm hoping the latter is true, but I do feel sad, as Theif Bakura is obviously hurting over this - And if he can't have Ryou, I want him to find some love =3) Anyway, great job...I was expecting a fic written by a 14 year old or something when I saw it had only four stars...somebody really under rated you because fic deserves five! hope you find time to update - Until then, will await the next chapter.
person Iyasu
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love this story, even if it is an AU. It's the best AU I've ever read! *sniff* Come on! Seto can't die! I dun want to lose my Seto/Jou pairing! Ryou can't either! Update soon!
person nocturne
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow. this is really good! X33 I love it! ^----^ looking forward to more. XD
person Eien no Ai
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter! Looks like more plot twists await us, judging from Jonouchi's dream sequence, but also some hints are appearing! Let's say this story is always intriguing and often full of suspense - that dream Jou had just freaked me out, you know!
And the description of Kaiba's condition was great - I could almost feel how terribly weak he has become and how he struggled to keep that illness of his in check, at least for a while. Very very well done ^_^ Though Seth must have made him feel even worse in a way with all those perceptive comments! (Then again, if Kaiba sees only those memories of Jumoke and is worried about Jonouchi's life because of them, he's being quite obvious!) I nearly expected Seth to say what had happened in the meantime without Kaiba's knowledge, but now I think it will be better if Jonouchi is going to tell him about it. And after all, it doesn't matter that much at the moment, or does it? Because Kaiba finally admitted his feelings not only to himself, but also to the person involved. (Poor Jou, he thought he would confess first ^_^;). Anyway, that scene was really sweet - the kissing, hugging, talking - all wonderful! Though it had a sad background since Kaiba is practically at the verge of death.
Ahh! I'm so eager to see what happens next!
person LY37
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story! Please, I hope you complete it. Thanks for sharing with us readers.
person Tink
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was awsome ^^
You have to write more.
Omg.. the Ryou/T.Bakura scene.. guh *drools* You write great lemons XD

Update sooooon! Please!!
person MARMangaFan
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Generally, I'm not into the Ancient Egypt storyline, but you have done a great job with it. Plus, Yugi as the palace idiot who likes to play games is priceless! I'm very interested to find out how Priest Seth and Tombrobber Bakura ended up in modern-day Domino, and how things will be resolved. I look forward to reading more.
person Jester
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Plzzzzzz update. I've been looking for a fanfiction like this for a while and it drives me crazy to see that it hasn't been updated in almost a MONTH! Pwease update! And let me bear your babies! But update first!!! I LUFF the Thief!Bakura x Ryou pairing, absolutely and totally. I want to see Yami Bakura's reaction to it!!! Hurry and updaaattttteeee!!!!!
person whosjeebus
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! Very original and engaging, with spot on characterization. Can't wait for the next update! Very interested in seeing where the thickening plot takes us next. Thanks for the great read, and keep up the good work!