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for Yugi-Chan in Wonderland

by shizukakaiba

schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that's pretty good. keep it up.
person Iyasu
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to act a lot more detail in your fic. I mean, right now, it's exactly like the manga, and although the manga is good, is has pictures whereas you don't.
person blade
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude continue the story
person Angel
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the hell,write more ...It's um.......very,interesting.....and funny.HOW THE HELL DID YOU COME UP WITH THIS?????????I'm not saying its not good,and as I siad before its inetresting.However, I do have one request,FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!With support,he,he,he,he,he,he,he,he,he,he,he,wa,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha!!!!!!!!!!!!bye bye,(until next time)
person AnimeMan
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was not bad, but still really good hurry an up date
person Imasuky Lomae
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon i love this one andthe maiden in love story to but i cant wait for this one to get updated because i LOVE Miyuki-chan so much.
With love; Imasuky Lomae
person onymus
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update please
person Dark Novei
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good. i can't wait for more!
person Kurarise
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my ra i love this story i really wanna know what happens next! please update soon!!!!!! *does puppy dog eyes*
person Jeannie
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this is...odd (not that odd is nessicarily a bad thing, I just can't find another word for it). Maybe I woud understand better if I actualy read Muyuki-chan in Wonderland. But I still, a good begining and I hope you decide to contiune with it, it semes like this will be a wonderful off the wall fic so far.