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for Changing Makes a Difference

by MagicReeni

person malik\'sgurl
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think i'll go with Unexpected Love. it sounds cool. good job with this fic.
person rin lockheart
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna have to go for the, "Unexpected Love". Just because I think that it'd be cute! *^_^*
person Lera
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this one sounds great i'd love to rad it. if you need help just ring the bell *puts up bell*

Love is Unexplainable – Yami and Yugi are twin
brothers who get separated when they’re babies. They meet up again in high
school and they fall in love with other. But how long will that be able to
last?

person cy
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Great story,

I got a few ideas for a sequal,
if you want to hear my ideas e-mail me, OK!

Again Great Story!!!!
person malik\'sgurl
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it doesn't matter if it wasn't the best! it was so cute! i really liked it!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 is really beautiful. I am a sucker for sweet stories.
person Frankie
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is fantastic! And I would love to see a sequel! I can't think of any ideas right now, but if you wana email me sometime and chat I'd love to throw my imagination in to it =D
person Taryn
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. And the lemon wasn't bad. Somedays they just wont' come and others they practically write themselves. I've been putting off writing my lemon for a very long time now... around a month.
If you wanted to write a sequel that'd be lovely. Maybe you could focus a bit more on some of the other couples? possibly Joey and Seto? Just an idea. or in the sequel you could write about Yami informing his mother of him being gay and have Yami deal with his new sibling. Maybe huld uld have Yuugi stay the summer with him? It'd be interesting if nothing else.
I am excitedly awaiting the next chapter. Keep on writing!
~Taryn~
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: That was sooo sweet!
YD: But Keith REALLY needs an ass kicking!
DD: Gods! He's reproduced! That's so scary!
YD: *shudder*
person NekoJounouchi aka Jams
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Well that lemon was very good! ^.^
Seto Plushie: ::chucks lemon at author::
Neko Jounouchi: That wasn't very nice.
Seto Plushie: When am I nice...??
Jams: ^.^U ::sweatdrop:: Boys... Anywho, if ya do a sequel there definately has to have some Seto/Jou action!
Seto Plushie: Aww hell no!!
Jams: ::thwacks Seto Plushie:: Aww hell yes!! Anywho... ::glares at Seto Plushie:: it's a great story. ::glomps author::