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by MagicReeni

person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:hey Red Dragon here again and i just wanted to say great ficcy oh and like i said before im going to make tea and keith pay NO ONE AND I REPEAT N O E H E H U R T S YAMI AND YUGI AND LIVES IM GOING TO BRING THEM HRE WITH THE REST OF THE YGO CAST AND TORTURE TEA N KEITH TILL THEY BEG TO DIE WITH MY SISTER AT MY SIDE*puffs in anger* what about u White Dragon
WD:well i for one am going to make tea pay for using poor ryou's mystake against him the two timing half witted nendrathalian bitch from planet whoremania grr get the heavy artilery these two are going to know pain like never before
RD:i second that pulls out remote control and every sing wepon imaginable is brought out(uknow like in the matrix when all those wepons show up)and now to bring out the the cast and the presents for yugi and Yami for having to deal with all this pain *glares playfully at the author* ur lucky arthor i like your fic else ud be joining tea and keith for what u did to Yugi and Yami ::glomps author and gives her a new rare diomond tha has the power to grant her her most greates desires:::
WD: k inc ygo cast *creates a whirl wind it goes off and five minutes later reappears with the ygo cast all winded and confused*
YGO:what are we doing here and why are all those wepons out
RD: u will se but first could yugi and Yami come here pls
YY,Y*come forard a little nervous especially yugi* what is it
RD: here *gives them some gifts* these are diomonds that can grant u what u wish for when u wish for it and these two cans yugi are for repelling insults and punches and bounce them back at the one who gave it and the other is to basically having them believe u are a god sent from heaven to make them quiver in awe hehe and now finally bothe of u get a set of animals that i feel make great friends for u and protectors like two dragons,two unicorns,two eagles and two wolves one set is white the other is black and they all only obey u and live off your emotion in other words if u feels threatened by someone then they wil react and attack same for yami and his troulbes*glares at Keith*so what do u think
YY,Y:wee the thnks now can u tell us why we are here
RD:sure basically we r angry at tea and KEith and want 2 hurt them for hurtin u 2 so grab a wep ive got plenty from every age every dynasty and if u wish to know a style just give the name and u will know it like for example*grabs a samurai's blade unsheethes it and says then name of the styles she wants to know*hiten mitsirougi style *begins to preform that technique* see easy and thats how they work and u can also choose a wep like that your fave monster hasbecobecom that monster if u want ok who want to kill tea and keith now oh and before i for get as for a sequal um maybe take off were yami takes yugi to his house for the summer and then things can take off from there and as for my vote the its only game plus that one were yami and yugi are bros and the one were the hikaris go to ancient egypt ok lets go guys*all graps wepons and start killing tea and keith* All:ja
person Ashley-chan
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I personally like the one with Malik x Ryou. So, there's my vote. As much as I love the Yami x Hikari thing(Courtesy of Edmondia Dantes, author of 'Possession'), nothing beats a good Hikari x Hikari ficcie. Or even a Yami x Yami. Like Ryou x Yugi, or Malik x Ryou, or Malik x Yugi....or Bakura x Marik, or Marik x Yami, or Yami x Bakura. -Hentai grin.- I am soooo corrupyed, but oh well. Ciao!
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Love Sappy endings!
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do Love is Unexplainable.
person yami\'s baby
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
write 'with you' please
person Taryn
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful fic. I hope that you do eventually write a sequel to it. You could have Yami trying to overcome his hatred for Keith, and accept his new sibling (whoahdn'dn't I say that before? -_-;;)

"It Was Just a Game" sounds good. It has a certain originality to it.
I'm assuming that the character would be Yami?

Anywho, I can't wait to see what you do nexTaryTaryn~
person Elys
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
do unexpected love!!!!! do that one!!!!! please?! and um do you think you could, you know if you do that one, um could you mabe make it in to a........... you know a um....a well you know a marikxryouxbakuraxmalik? please?
person Elys
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh sorry i forgot to that I RELLY LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ps. do unexpected love.
person YamiYugiGal
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic, however the many ideas you had at the end of the fic were bad....It has nothing to do with this fic really, you state at the end Yami and Yugi will be at YAMIS house for the summer....I think it would be more...Interesting if you did something within that time frame, maybe even Yami could get Kieth locked up, or something. Just a simple idea is all liekd the fix, I enjoyed reading it whenever I saw your updates ^_^.

~YYG
person malik\'sgurl
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think i'll go with Unexpected Love. it sounds cool. good job with this fic.