rate_review Reviews

I love your writing! This is probably some of the best I've seen up lately and I 'm so impressed! Do you have any more stories? I love Yu-Gi-Oh and approve of yaoi pairings! e-mail me and tell me if you do have any more stories! I 'd be so happy if I could review them! Domo Arigatou!!! ^.^

does that mean we can only vote for thoes two, cause i wanted the one with Malik Marik Ryou and Bakura in

I vote for With You

couldya do 'With You' and Unexpected love' they sound the most intresting ^.^

Wow this fic was so *burst in to tears* i could never write this much and this Good. so what if it wasnt orignal. Anywho, i thin that 'With you' sound good and 'Unexpective love' sound even better please *puppy dog eye'd*

i want with you please

I vote for 'With you' ^___________^ BTW, this story was sooooooooooooooooooooo good!

Love is unexplainable sounds good for the two tie-breakers.

RD:hey Red here again good fic but god dammit those stupid bullies and that tea is no different grr i hate them all for hurting yugi and causing Yami troulble really as much as i love the guy and believe me i really do*looks over and shrine she made in dedication to yugi and Yami made of the finest silver,gold,diamond,rubies and all riches of the world*hehe but really Yami how could like guys like them when they try to hurt ppl like Yugi who didnt do anything hey White Dragon get the remote

WD:what for*looks at RD nervously*
RD:cuz i want to get the artilery and show those bullies and Keith to cuz i read this story before what happens when u mess with yami and yugi and tea(aka Bitchempress of the es)ues)uh whats with that Yami-kins thing i mean really Yami is a masculine guy here so pls no stupid lovey dovey names unless its something like ni-chan whatever that is so WD get the weps out now pls
WD:alright*takes out the remote and presses the button to bring racks apoun racks of wepons from every region of the glope from every time zone and from reality to fiction(u know like wizzy staffs and stuff)ok i get lets see *picks a bebe Gun a lazer gun two rocket launchers two farsights and three samurai blades* and my fav the AR 47assult rifle alsown awn as the Hiei imitator cuz its just as brutal as he is

RD:-_-;;;;;;;;;;; ooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkk and i guess i choose*picks three farsights two slayers four mage staffs and high lvl druid spells includ nukes Dots/damage over time spells and wolf form two BEWD and five REBD and seven DMs and eight DMGs*ok im done now lets get to killing *snaps fingers all bullies appear* ok rdy aim and FIRE *takes all her weps and attacks the bullies with WD following in close persuit* oh and one more thing author good story keep it up and JA WD:ja

RD:hey Red Dragon here nice ficcy lots of drama and sweet passion though i kinda just skimmed past the part were Yami get u know t wor word by that SON OF A MOTHER FUCKING WHORE SEARCHING BASTARD sry for my tounge but it gets me so mad when someone thinks they can just hurt Yami and not get away with it and Tea(aka the bitch from twitsvile) she is no better tormenting yugi like that what kind of twisted female is she i swear ppl like her give us decent loving females like myself a VERY BAD NAME*glares at tea for ruining all female reputation* in fact white Dragon bring all the YGO cast in pls i think there are going to love this

WD:*glances at RD nervously what did u have in mind


RD:simple im going to torture tea and i know everyone will enjoy every minute of it and Keith to and not just by myself but with my beloved siste wel well

WD O_O:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::; Y-YYYOUR KIDDING RIGHT !?!?!?! i mean i know your angry but really is your sister REALY nessecary u know what she can do


RD:oh i asure i am serious and dont tell u think keith and tea dont deserve this i mean incase u forgotten she used RYOU"S little mystake against Yugi REMEMBER


WD:>_< DONT REMIND ME THAT TWISTED SELF SERVING DITSY HEADY BITCH ID KILL HER WITH MY OWN BARE HANDS FOR NEARLY DESTROYING YUGI AND PRACTICALLY PUTING THE BLAME ON RYOU U KNOW WHAT ILL JOIN U AND YOUR SISTER IN TORMENTING THESE TWO THEY URNED IT*puff in extertion from bringing out half of her anger*

RD:O_O well im glad u are willing to join us now *calls her sister over* OH BLACK RED DRAGON come her sis i need your help WERE ABOUT TO TORMENT TEA AND KEITH WITH THE ENTIRE YGO CAST WATCHING

BRD:great so were are they ive got some great new ways to torment MWAHAHAHAHAHHA*starts cackling insanly with a devilish look in her eyes* so come on already bring them out

WD: alright alright here we go* blows out a twister wich leaves and five minutes later reapears with all the YGO cast members looking a little winded and confused*

YGOcast:were are we

RD: this will be fun oh um tea Keith could u come here pls we want to show u two something

Tea:oh realy finally im getting the attention and respect i deserve

Keith:no prob toosts and maybe after this u and your two friends here would like to spends some R&R with me huh

RD: R I G H T whatever anyways look what we've got for u*pulls a whip with electro shock of 100K volts of electricity and whips it forward and slashes tea who shrieks in pain and the shock numbing her from the inside out* ha houd do u like it know tea nots so much fun is it when you are on the recieving end and pain that seems to shock your heart now is it

YGOC:*cheers loudly supporting RD's actions*

RD: and now sis u and WD can have a crack at keith and then me and WD will finish whats left of tea and then get rid of bothe of their remains oh wait *looks and the cast* is there a Yugi Motou and Yami Hitokage and a Ryou Bakura with Bakura Yuwimba any were

YY,Y,R,B:yes

RD: well for your trouble with these two pests*glares at tea and Keith who is currently screaming at the pain he is getting from WD,BRD who are laughing in great joy at his pain*im granting u all your hearts desires by way of gifts lets see here* whistles and a bag the size of MT emerest apears and she digs into it for the gifts to Yugi,Yami,Ryou,and Bakura*ah ha here they are lets see for yugi u get * takes a Giant breathe for its a lot of stuff* a spray can that deflects all insults and aims back at your bullies a spray can that emmits and fragrance so wonderful that all u smell it wil think a god is walking among them who radiats beauty and charm a infinite supply of candies,chocolate and my personal fave SODA under these name hersey,nesly,etc moutain dew and again etc and a copy of mesmeric control were u can have a person do as u wish them to and two sets of dragon balls so u can have whatever wish granted to u not beyond the dragon's limit for he has no limit and lets see here oh yes a complete new wardrope with all the latest hotest leather outfits all in red,blue,black dark green,gold, and neon white and a white dragon a white horse a white Unicorn and white Pegesas(the horse not the man)a white gizel and oh yes a white eagle and white hawk and a white artic wolf as companions and thats its *gasps for breath*my that was a quite extensive and so i dont end up repeating myself and risking passing out from lack of breath all u get the same thing excetp the animals wil be what fits your char and will be a color similar to what u like and now hows it going WD,BRD*looks over to see Keith writhing in agony with bothe WD,BRD smirking above him* OOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooookkkkkkkkk i guess that answers my question now before i forget authoress my votes on new fics are its just a game and that one were the hikaris wind up in Egypt and the one were Yami and Yugi are brothers and as for the sequal um have it were Yugi and Yami are starting a new life outside of Highschool yeah and Yami is starting College and Yugi is to but they also split back and forth running the game shop and with Seto's help make it a blooming buisness and have it were after his visit with yami over the summer Keith decides he'd like to have Yugi as well and tries the same tactic on him but every time he get haulted and has to wait and soon when he knows yugi is alone in the game shop tries and succeeds barely but as a result he gets busted thnks u Author rebecca and of course Yami and his friend and naturally u have to show yugi starting off his final year yami agreeing to looking after yugi's shop until he can while he is going to college and they still see each other very often and then yugi goes to college as well and thats how i see but up to u so YGO cast care to join in the killing of tea and keith

YGOC:YEAH LETS MAKE THOSE TWO SCUM SUCKING BITCHES PAY *goes after tea and Keith with me,WD,BRD and yugi,yami,ryou,and bakura after thanking us for the gifts and give me and WD a kiss for their fans join them in massacuring tea and keith* RD:THIS IS A WARNING TO ALL IF U HURT YUGI OR RYOU OR YAMI OR BAKURA U WILL ONLY END UP HURTING YOURSELF GOT THAT ja for now

YGO:ja ne

WD,BRD:JA