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for In My Heart

by serialcabbit78

person Ra\'s Dragon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe!
person smalvina
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope to read next chapter soon
person joey-lover
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! i LOVE it!! it's great!!! i could just picture joey, mokuba, and kaiba sleeping together! that would be so kawii (cute) i really hope ya write more soon! oh and i was wondering if u could maybe...um...send me an e-mail saying u wrote more. ok well hope ya write more!
person Yaky
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well So far So Good(what am I saying HELL YEAH IT WAS GOOD AND HOT AND SEXY) can't wait for nchapchapter HOPE you update and and let me know when you do LATER!!!^_^
person KC
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: not yet?! been 2 months!
Yami: *hugs me* what's wrong koi?
Me: she hadn't updated for 2 months! *sobs*
Yami: shhknowknow what makes u feel better
Me: *blushes* um, not in front of the author!
Yami: *laughs* not that. i'll duel u in duel monsters
Me: *blushes embarrassed* oops? i thought u meant...
Yami: *smiles* i know, but we will later on tonight when everyone is in bed.
Me: *blushes* um... sure Yami. *walks quietly to her bedroom*
Yami: *watches me* PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *follows me*
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You wrote that in 30 minutes? Wow. Cool. Good job, I hope more is up faster than it has been! Please! Arigato! Oyasumi!^______^
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OH GODS!! Get on with it!!
DD: Someone's sexually frusterated.
YD: Shut up you!!
DD: Poor guys, they keep getting interrupted.
YD: NEXT CHAPPIE!! PLEASE!!!!
person fairy
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like continue plaese ^_^x
person Cabbit Ryo-Ohki
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, Yami Dragon, cut the author some slack.... just because she left a cliffie doesnt mean you have to kill her.
person Jane Silver
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mokuba couldn't have wors timing. But I'm glad he did interupt it was moving a litly to fast.