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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh fun S&M Yuugi/Yami stuff going on in this chappy... very nice...^_^ Their getting kinky with soda pop? SODA POP? Ooookaaay.....whatever floats your boat...hmmm..the mushroom being a fungus was funny too. ^-^ PLEASE UPDATE THIS FIC WITH NEW CHAPPY SOOOOON! ARIGATO! ^_____^ Ja ne!
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June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OOOOO...good lemon!
DD: It was! And I loved the "dark and ugly" comment.
YD: Jada's SO funny!!
DD: Can't wait for the next chappie!
YD: Can I put in a request for ao/Joo/Joey lemon?
DD: *rolls eyes* You would!
YD" *tries to look innocent* What? So, is Max gonna get it on with Jada?
DD: It was! And I loved the "dark and ugly" comment.
YD: Jada's SO funny!!
DD: Can't wait for the next chappie!
YD: Can I put in a request for ao/Joo/Joey lemon?
DD: *rolls eyes* You would!
YD" *tries to look innocent* What? So, is Max gonna get it on with Jada?
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June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Aww, I like Pegasus, in this anyway.
LD: Yeah, he is not too bad when oesnoesn't have the eye. I actually feel bad about the whole Cynthia thing.
Karen: hehe. As good as the lemon was, I like the second half of the chapter better. It was just so laid back and funny.
LD: Yeah, Joey is so crass and Jada is cutely clueless. It is great!
LD: Yeah, he is not too bad when oesnoesn't have the eye. I actually feel bad about the whole Cynthia thing.
Karen: hehe. As good as the lemon was, I like the second half of the chapter better. It was just so laid back and funny.
LD: Yeah, Joey is so crass and Jada is cutely clueless. It is great!
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June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hooray I'm always up for some YxY smut. Should I expect some BxR smut too?
[Just a tip I seriously doubt ANY pizza place would deliver during a hurricane. In storms that bad most places are closed and it seems downright cruel to force a Pizza Guy out that weather which can be flat out deadly. If pizza is integral to the plot I'd just have them make it in the kitchen.]
Icz
[Just a tip I seriously doubt ANY pizza place would deliver during a hurricane. In storms that bad most places are closed and it seems downright cruel to force a Pizza Guy out that weather which can be flat out deadly. If pizza is integral to the plot I'd just have them make it in the kitchen.]
Icz
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More!!! I need to read more !!!! Please hurry up with the next chappy!!! lololo ^_^
Devilangelvana's yami: Don't mind her, she's a lunatic.
shut up! :P
Devilangelvana's yami: Don't mind her, she's a lunatic.
shut up! :P
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damnit you're gonna make me feel sorry for the him. Isis.
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...the plot thickens like gravy!! Peggy got thrown in there huh? The ppor thing! I wonder who Presidio is....it pains me to think on who it could be. Shadi is sinister, but not totally harsh! This is an excellent story...please add more soon!
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! more more!
this story is good!!! keep it coming
whee!!!
this story is good!!! keep it coming
whee!!!
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, wonderful story. So well written. Jada even seems to fit in well. Chapter five is just 'wow!'. I love drama. ^-^;
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: *bleep* Bakura! What a *bleep* mouth you've *bleep* got on you! *BLEEP*!
DD: *rolls eyes*
YD: What?
DD: Anyways...poor Max! I feel so sorry for him.
YD: This story is really *bleep* good!
DD: Duct tape huh? I know there's some around here somewhere.
DD: *rolls eyes*
YD: What?
DD: Anyways...poor Max! I feel so sorry for him.
YD: This story is really *bleep* good!
DD: Duct tape huh? I know there's some around here somewhere.