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I really enjoyed this story so far

The Millennium Necklace or Tauk is the name of the seventh item that you're looking for. Isis (both past and present owns it).

--kenobi1985

Hi,
Oh my god! I love this story, it's like...like...like...um god I don't know......the best thing since sliced bread! I don't think in all the stories I've read I've found one this original. I mean some people instert weird OC's and expect the plot to just work but Jada so works in this story, and the way you made Pegasus kinda good and need help was very cool. Not to mention the fact that Yugi forgave him and 'Kura didn't send him to the shadow realm THAT I didn't see coming! :) I've actually only just stumbled onto your profile again and re-read your story and kinda went "wow" must write review,must write review,must write review. It was a sorta mantra! I seriously(did I spell that write?) hope you continue to write otherwise i, for one, will be absolutely devasteted!
Thank you for the enjoyment you gave me and I hope more stories will follow.....(shameless hint soz!)
Luv
Tenshi of Time
-x-

P.S. If you can find it in your heart to write a Yami/Seto/Yugi story like this (although it would totally screw up everything you've got going now so you don't have to!) then I would be eternally grateful as it is soooooooo incredably hard to find enough decent ones! Well sorry totake up your time!
Your humbubble servant
Tenshi of Time
-x-

Yo....I knew that I'd eventually get around to reading the end....Yay! v^-^V Nother good one Maddy!

Wow, just wow. This is some kick-ass fanfic with good scene and action discriptions, characters that sound and act like real people (I think I dated a guy like Joey once :) ) and a great story. Oh, and you write a pretty hot love scene too.

damn...i want lessons too! why is it that the people in stories always have far, far hotter sex than anyone in the real world? Oh, and Pegasus' *wife* was named Cecilia. She died of some type of fast-moving disease right after they were married. Reference US episode #38 "King of Games", the very last Duelist Kingdom episode. It contains the scene where Tea reads aloud from Pegasus' journal and they learn the story behind his development of Duel Monsters and his search for the Millenium Items. He kept a large portrait of her in the tower room where they find the journal. Hope that helps, belated as it is...I'm sure someone's already told you. But it makes me feel better, and gives me an excuse to say GOOD STORY!! I'm only on Ch. 4 so far, but I'll finish it today and I'm sure I'll like it a lot. At least you write citrus of the yaoi variety well, there aren't many who can write it so I don't want to look away in English-major shame and disgust. Not for the acts, but for the grammar, structure, and sheer formulaic tendencies of most of the YGO yaoi writings out there. Not that a cute, sappy one-shot doesn't have it's own appeal (what better to read before bed to ensure nice dreams and a restful sleep?), but longer stories require a bit more lemony creativity, and it's not too common that a fanfic writer can actually write something that would hold my attention if it weren't about YGO (and sometimes I can't even stay when it *is* about YGO). Change the names and some basic character details and 99.9% of the fanfic out there becomes mindless angsty (or preachy) highschool dribble - the kind of stuff I wrote in highschool but was always too embarra to to show to anyone until I'd edited it beyond all recognition. And even then I never showed most of it. But, you have some work to be proud of here, I think - at least from what I've read. I'll tack another note on to this one when I finish it if I have any exceptionally strong feelings about the ending. Otherwise, Good Show, keep it up, love the story, etc. etc. Oh, and I really like how you came up with some NEW terms of endearment for Yami to call Yuugi...endless repetitions of 'aibou', 'koibito', and 'little one' are getting rather tiresome...calling him 'little jewel' and 'amethyst' was a good call. Hope to read more in this general vein from you soon.
Peas!
NekoNeko

PS - The humorous bits are wonderful! Again, it's a rare fanfic writer who can actually have the characters say something funny without it coming off as cruel, entirely OOC, or very stilted and unflowing. Basically, I really like your work.

Yeah!! Happy ending!! PPPIIIZZZZAAAA!!!! the food of the gods!! Heehee! Can't wait to see more from you!!

Lady Elfskye!

FINALLY! AN UPDATE! You've made me so happy!

Oh my Inari-sama! This fic is soooo good. *shudders wdelidelight* I've always been interested with Tarot readings ... *winks* I'll keep this in mind ... *wide eyes* If you don't mind and if you have the time ... *claps her hands together* Please e-mail me some more tarot reading techniques? I'd be very much obliged if you do! But even if you don't, I'm just happy to sit here on my very comfy chair re-reading this fic over and over and over ...

P.S. Yes I'm weird. So is everyone else if they're normal. :P

Wow! Good story!! Keep em coming!! Oh, and I do miss Pegasus too. I think he is a great bad guy! Someone twisted due to evil happening to him. Marik is almost too much. Anywho. Keep it going!! Waiting for the Next chappie

Lady Elfskye