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for Bite-Sized

by SolitaireandXpyne

person KC
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: NOT YET!!! ITS BEEN 4 MONTHS!!!
Yami: what's wrong?
Me: been 4 months since its been updated!!!
Yami: aibou? i think i did send her to the shadow rhelm! *smiles*
Me: *smirks* no wonder, how'd u know its a she?
Yami: *shrugs* just guessing and i'm always right.
Me: not really Yami. *rolls eyes*
Yami: aibou, your review? *blushes*
Me: *stares at Yami* if u r really in the shadow rhelm, i'm happy cause its been 4 freaking months!!!
Yami: i know koi, that's why i sent her there for good.
Me: *cheers* Anywayz, please continue if your not in the shadow rhelm!!!
Yami: what do u mean by that Koi? *eyes surprised*
Me: *sighed* nothing love. *kisses Yami passionately*
Yami: *moans and break the kiss* PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
Me: unless they have computers to in the shadow rhelm *smirk*
Yami: *whispers something in my ear*
Me: *blushes and nods*
Yami: *smiles* PLEASE CONTINUE!!! *carries me to my bedroom*
person KC
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*looks at the update date* excuse me? there's no new chapter!!! WHAT THE FUCK!? "aibou?" WHAT? "What r u so mad about?" THAT BITCH DIDN'T UPDATED YET!!! *looks at date also* "Oh, well, continue your thing," Thanks Yami! STUPID BITCH, DIDN'T UPDATED YET!!! PLEASE, I REALLY, REALLY WANT TO KNOW!!! I'M PISSED OFF U KNOW. aNYWAYZ, CONTINUE OR ELSE I WILL BE REVIEWING EVERYDAY OR ONCE PER WEEK!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
person KC
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING BASTARD!!! HAVEN'T UPDATED YET, HUH? ITS BEEN FOUR FREAKING MONTHS!!! WHEN R U GOING TO UPDATE!!! I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
person KC
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
come on, i've been reviewing since that you didn't updated yet. "Aibou!" What yami? "Come here," why? "Come here" *walks over to her* What? "I luv u" really Yami? *nods* *hugs Yami and kisses her passionatley* After awhile, "aibou?" hmm? "your review?" *pouts* "We'll finish this in our bedroom later, ok?" *blushes* Ok, yami. HURRY TO UPDATE!!!
person KC
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ITS BEEN FOUR MONTHS GUYS!!! WHY ARE U DOING THIS TO ME?!!! "THEY JUST WANT TO TORTURE U AIBOU" YAMI, HOW COULD U SAY THAT? "ITS TRUE" *SMIRKS* VERY FUNNY, PLEASE UPDATE TODAY!!! "GO AND GIVE THEM A REVIEW EVERYDAY UNTIL THEY UPDATE, OK AIBOU?" GREAT IDEA YAMI! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL REVIEW UNTIL U DO!!!
person KC
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck is that about? Its been months since you've updated!!! Come on!!! ::Aibou!:: What? ::Be nice!:: But the author didn't updated yet! Been two months! *Sighed* ::Continue on than:: Thanks Yami! I'll give u author a coke and some candies to get u all hyper!!! In one condition, UPDATE QUICKLY!!!
person KC
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, UPDATE pretty SOON!!! I want to KNOW what happens NEXT!!! DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT TAKE LONG THAN A WEEK TO FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I REPEAT, DO NOT TAKE LONG THAN A WEEK TO FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ::Aibou!:: *laughs* What? ::What r u doing to the author?:: *smirks* Just making sure if the author will update soon! ::ok aibou!:: Night, Yami! where was I? DO NOT TAKE LONG THAN A WEEK TO FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!


person aniron legolas
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
person me...?
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update soon! i luv this fic but it hasn't been updated lately.... like most good stories.... it's no done...
person Blue September
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just couldn't resist the urge to review this here as well, since I noticed that that DAMNED EVIL ff.net took your account away... again! This is just becoming a pain, but I won't focus on that right now.

I can't put into words how FUNNY this is! It's almost too much! I don't know where you get your ideas but I'm definitely not complaining about it. That emotion diversion was a stroke of pure genious! Who thought it up and how do you keep your work so original?! Poor Joseph... wait a minute. What am I talking about?! LUCKY DOG! I wonder what Yami will say to Yuugi next time he sees him. "Thanks," perhaps?

So anyway, write more as soon as you can. You guys are too good at this to ever stop writing!

~Blue~