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by SolitaireandXpyne

person Shorty*
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if it was intended or if it's because it was 3am when I read it, but Chapter 2 was THE funniest thing I have read lately. I could not stop myself from laughing at just about everything there. XD

This story is good. I liked Seto's realization in Ch. 5. It was like a big ole "DUH!" but it was interesting that he had not thought of it that way yet. I hope you mention the Yugi/Yami/puzzle connection in the last chapter. Embarrass Yugi! lol
person KC
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
me: *sighed* FINALLY!!!
Yami: *smirked* happy koi? I gave them a second chance
Me: second chance? *confuse look*
Yami: yea, i free them out of the shadow realm
Me: *smirk* guess your right koi *hugs her*
Yami: *sighed* let's continue this upstairs, ne?
Me: *nods and kisses Yami's neck*
Yami: *moans and carries me upstairs*
UNKOWN VOICE: PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE, WE CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!! DON'T WAIT 2 LONG LIKE THE OTHER CHA!!! !!! OR WE'LL GIVE U MORE REVIEWS UNTIL U UPDATE!!! HURRY 2 UPDATE!!!


CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *PUPPY DOG LOOKS*
person Terry
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel both sorry and glad for Joey and Yami! That had to be intense for them too! Yami needs to lecture Yugi about the use of the puzzle. I agree that you definitely took a different approach to the pairings! Hope you update soon.
person bishoonenlover
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD! Finally you decided to update! I believed you had given up on this story. So good that you didn't! Great chapter, but I loved it best when Yugi was channeling certain 'feelings' through the puzzle and how it 'bothered' Yami. *snicker* The seme Yugi was good... it is about time Yugi got that stick out of Seto's ass! ... Or that he put his 'stickn, wn, whatever suits you best. ^_^
person Kysarin
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
....

You're my hero. Both of you. :P

Thank you!!! Do you know how long I've been waiting for you guys to update that? Like... forever. It's one of my favorite fics. Mmm... uke Seto... *re-reads*

^_^
person bishoonenlover
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So you moved it here uh? Where is the the next chapter? I have been waiting since as long as can't remember. But I know its been a while.
person kammi
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet.

Now update goddammit!
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
XD AWESOME!! But you need to update damnit! How can you leave it there?!? GAH! This story is WAY too good to waste, PLEASE update!
person Ravid
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! i love this fic! I was reading it on FF.net ages ago but it 's not there anymore... *pout* so PLEASE update it here.... i REALLY want to read chap. 5.....
person KC
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *sobs* its been 4 months!!!
Yami: shh, i'll bet that he has a good reason.
Me: always gussing the genders huh?
Yami: *smiles* i know aibou. *kisses my forehead*
Me: *sighed and snaked my hand under her shirt*
Yami: stop, not in front of the author.
Me: aw... why not?
Yami: its embarraassing.
Me: *pouts* CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
Yami: *laughs* don't pout on me aibou. we'll continue on our love making tonight when all of the family is asleep. ok?
Me: *blushes* um, whatever yami. *walkes out of room*
Yami: *wide eyed* did she just walk out of the room? PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *runs after me*