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for Bite-Sized

by SolitaireandXpyne

person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! JUST POSITIVELY, ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS! OUTSTANDING job, I enjoyed reading this so very much! ^^
person annikki
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person Tendrilrake (Not Lgd in)
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Falls off her chair laughing hystericaly* That was brilliant! It was so friken hilarios I could hardly stop laughing! The love sceens were originaly and well planed as well- great job! *Runs off to read other stories by said authors*
person Silvershadowfire
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, i don;t believe I have ever read a story that was so sexy and so frigging HILARIOUS at the same time! The lemons were great, and I loved the side-story of Yami getting all hot and bothered when Yugi was...taking liberties with the puzzle. Hehehe. Great story, please write more!
person yugismine
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... good story. And the end was so kawaii! Can't wait to read ur next story! (and there'd better be one^_-)
person Yami Kitsune
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gotta question...
there's now way Yami shut his side of the link
and yugi couldn't block ALL the transmitions
so when he went over to Ryou's and bakura's
you can't tell me nothing happened

any chance on you wrighting THAT little side story?
person Athene
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeee* Joey called Yami "Red Eyes"!! Sugoi!! Tres cool!! continue writing, ok? Loved the story!
~Athe
Ra
Random Thought # 17: If Yami Yugi and Yami Bakura were nicer than Yugi and Ryou, would they be called "Hikari Yugi" and "Hikari Bakura"?
person KC
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY U GUYS UPDATED ONE OF YOUR STORIES!!! WHAT ABOUT THE OTHERS? WHEN R U GOING 2 GO AND UPDATE THEM ALSO? YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE OR I'LL KEEP REVEWING UNTIL U DO!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!!
person polka dot
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really fun, but I would've like some more Joey/Yami action.
person Kurayami Ryuu
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have this on my favorites list on ff.net but I think that's the only place haven't reviewed at yet 0.o So, you've finally stopped teasing us about this chapter ^_~ Can't wait for the last one... *needs cold shower*