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for Father, Mother, Lover

by BishojoShadow

person Frankie
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another outstanding chapter! Keep it up.

btw- I reckon Honda should be working for their parents coz I don't like him much!
person Frankie
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This rocks! More soon?
person Frankie
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are soooooooooooooo evil to end it there! You have to do more and very soon!
person Frankie
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this so far. I reckon Yami should be mean at first but nicer as it goes on, if you know what I mean, like, start caring about Ryou and then he can sort himself out properly.
person Keysha
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want Yamo to be nice to Ryou!! I don't like it when he's cruel, even though I'm sure he has it in him. Make him cruel only when he needs to be, not an ass who needs to throw his weight around. Please update more soon!!
person Tara Kk
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uhm, it's a bit odd that Bakura knew what Ryou was going through. Sometimes nonvictims can tell, but not always. Glad you explained chapter 2.
person BuffyM
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice..Nice...NICE!!!!!!Make him nice!! poor ryou and yugi =( Make Yami nice or my yami spike will get you! lol
Yami Spike:*snores*
HikariBuffyM:Wake up Spike!...Yami wake your ass up now!
Yami Spike:*wakes up*What was that about asses?
BuffyM:No you have to ask the guys that!
All the yugiuys:uys:*blush*
BuffyM:heh,I think i've been reading solitaire and xpines stories too long...
person Tara Kk
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah...poor Ryou. I hope to see more.
person Tara Kk
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*blinks at chappie 2* Um..what XD? *Confuseled*
person bakurasgirl
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yeah! i love this fic!