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for Father, Mother, Lover

by BishojoShadow

person Frankie
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you are the most evil thing on earth if u dont update soon! very soon!
person Frankie
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was so good! I was crying! Poor Yami! Oh please do more soon!
person Frankie
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, I am crying right now! That was so heartbreaking! Yami has to find them soon! Please don't leave it too long before the next update! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Ths is such a hard fic for me too to read but I love it soooooooooooooooooooooooo much! If you get any flames just send them to me so I can have marshmallows!
person Frankie
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliffhangers! Please update soon. Pleeeeeeease?
person Tammy
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sad. Poor Yugi and Ryou. Hope it ends happy. By the way I think it should be a Yugi/Ryou, Yami/Bakura. Good story, please update soon
person Frankie
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
2 DAYS! It's only 24 hours over here! ARGH! OH NO YOU ARE SO EVIL TO LEAVE IT LIKE THAT You have to do more soon
person Frankie
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is heartbreaking! Is he gonna get Yugi as well b4 yami and bakura save them? Oh that could b soooooooo evil!!!! u r evil!!!!!!!!! arfg!!!!!! suspense!!!!!!!
person Frankie
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to do more and soooooooooooooooooooooooo soon.

btw- I still want y/y and r/b. and maybe s/j coz hes da good guy? heeheeheeheeheehee
person Frankie
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Honda is evil hehehe! Anyway- maube Ryou's dad cuold get himback and then be caught abusing him so he gets arested and then Bakura and Yami can adopt him (or get custody whatever. I think it's the same thing!). How's that sound? Oh well, up to you of course. More soon please?
person Frankie
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. totaly forgot to say, I'd love for this to be Y/Y and R/B. If you could work S/J in to it, I'd be in heaven =D Like I said, up to you of course! just my sugesstions.