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August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rurouni_agra: *Sobbing and screaming uncontrolably* I HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU KILKL THEM ALL! I MEAN IT DIDN'T HAVE TO HAVE A FAIRYTALE ENDING BUT YOU KILLED THEM! SUISIDE NO LESS! YOU COULD AT LEAST HAVE LET YAMI AND YUGI LIVE!
Yami Kitsune: *sigh* she doesn't mean that. You really pissed her off with that last chapter. So since my Light is too busy ranting, I'll you you what we really thought. The fic itself was well written an bot both liked it (exsept for the last ter ter on Ruouni's part) She actually cried through most of it.
Rurouni_agra: *still is crying but has stopped shouting* It *sob* It was *sob* It was so sad! *wail* I-I-I-I cryed!
Yami Kitsune: Your still crying!
Rurouni_agra: Shut up Kitsune. You didn't even blink at half the rape sceens.
Yami Kitsune: They were well written and enjoyed them a lot, but I don't blink at much of anything.
Rurouni_agra: Well... at least your not laughing like you normaly are when we review rape/angst fics. What do you kmow. This fic even got to my yami. 0.0 Wow.
Yami Kitsune: I'm not sure if that's a good thing... Anyway we liked the story. it made us cry (well rurouni cryed,) it made us laugh (uhh...that was just me,) it made us stay up till 1:30 reading it because it was so adicting. All in all it's a great fic in out book.
yami Kitsune: I just don't recomend it to people, like my light, who are over sensitive. Hell, like rurouni said...this fic even got to ME! Don't get me wrong I loved it. It's a good fic, just be sure you have the stumach for it. And to the author: I was just wondering why you unsed Joey (the name from American version) and then Honda (Japanesse version for Tristen) I just thought you might not have noticeed so this is for future reference for other fics. I hope you write more. Can't wait to read it. Ja.
Yami Kitsune: *sigh* she doesn't mean that. You really pissed her off with that last chapter. So since my Light is too busy ranting, I'll you you what we really thought. The fic itself was well written an bot both liked it (exsept for the last ter ter on Ruouni's part) She actually cried through most of it.
Rurouni_agra: *still is crying but has stopped shouting* It *sob* It was *sob* It was so sad! *wail* I-I-I-I cryed!
Yami Kitsune: Your still crying!
Rurouni_agra: Shut up Kitsune. You didn't even blink at half the rape sceens.
Yami Kitsune: They were well written and enjoyed them a lot, but I don't blink at much of anything.
Rurouni_agra: Well... at least your not laughing like you normaly are when we review rape/angst fics. What do you kmow. This fic even got to my yami. 0.0 Wow.
Yami Kitsune: I'm not sure if that's a good thing... Anyway we liked the story. it made us cry (well rurouni cryed,) it made us laugh (uhh...that was just me,) it made us stay up till 1:30 reading it because it was so adicting. All in all it's a great fic in out book.
yami Kitsune: I just don't recomend it to people, like my light, who are over sensitive. Hell, like rurouni said...this fic even got to ME! Don't get me wrong I loved it. It's a good fic, just be sure you have the stumach for it. And to the author: I was just wondering why you unsed Joey (the name from American version) and then Honda (Japanesse version for Tristen) I just thought you might not have noticeed so this is for future reference for other fics. I hope you write more. Can't wait to read it. Ja.
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.o That was soooooooooo sad!!! How could you kill them? But it was written very well! And you are a good writer!
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay you begged for a review all the way through, so here it is. THIS FIC ROCKS!!!
I did feel a bit angry at Ryou being beaten up at first, but I loved the rescue. I'm still laughing at them burning down the house. Poor Yami though, having to do that to Ryou. I did like it, it was well written and thought out too. ^_^ Keep writing then! Inspiration: Why not have rty,rty, birthday for Ryou, and give him a good one, or catch the others who conspired with the fathers? ^^ I hope I've helped! Lol, mail me^^
I did feel a bit angry at Ryou being beaten up at first, but I loved the rescue. I'm still laughing at them burning down the house. Poor Yami though, having to do that to Ryou. I did like it, it was well written and thought out too. ^_^ Keep writing then! Inspiration: Why not have rty,rty, birthday for Ryou, and give him a good one, or catch the others who conspired with the fathers? ^^ I hope I've helped! Lol, mail me^^
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July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This ending was lovely but so upsetting it kinds spoilt the fic. still i really think its sweet that they wood all meet up again after.
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July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gasps in shock* you killed them all.....
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! I had orignally read it on fanfiction.net but you didn't update on it! I was so excited when I finally read it! Keep up the good work and don't hesitate to email me kay?
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am soooooo happy you have finaly updated!!!!!!!! And happy bits at last! Oh you have to do more soon! Maybe my muse could search out yours for oyu? I'll set her on to it!
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June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi your story seems pritty good so far, I just wanted to tell you that your chapter 2 is from a different story. I hope you can correct it soon because I would like to read the real chapter 2.
Demon's Angel ^_^
Demon's Angel ^_^
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June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gomen! Sorry for the mix up but your story is really good. Keep writing!!! ^_^
Demon's Angel
Demon's Angel
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June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so far it is very interesting