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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I sat and read through 23 chapters of constant HEARTACHE. I wanted to stop reading so many times, but I was hopeful that things would turn out okay. And then the last chapter induced a heart-stabbing/squishing experience. Owch.... -_-;
But, it was a good story. Quite a few typos and html errors, but other than that it was amazing. Good job.
But, it was a good story. Quite a few typos and html errors, but other than that it was amazing. Good job.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg thats so sad.... but you know its true. in death you feal no pain. i gess im kinda like ryou, my souls been tourn but i have no idea why and iv tried to die at least 5 times. the pain will just never go away. iv got meny scars on my wrists from trying to get rid of my pain and sorrow. but i cant do it right. is it a sign not to end my tourtcherd life? but then if so what do i do.my heart is torn along with my soul i cant even think anymore. but i did like your fic. its helped me chose. in short ill see you from hell.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME storey. i love how you made the ending work.
The song at the end made me cry, but yugi, yami, bakura and ryou all dying made me happy for them.
I govisivision of angels screwing.
don't think I'll ever forget this fic.
The song at the end made me cry, but yugi, yami, bakura and ryou all dying made me happy for them.
I govisivision of angels screwing.
don't think I'll ever forget this fic.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE YOU THAT HAD BETTER HAD BEEN AN ALTERNATE ENDING THERE IS NO WAY IN HELL I JUST READ THAT ALL THE WAY THROUGH JUST TO HAVE IT END LIKE THAT!!!! THAT ENDING WAS ARRGHH I CANT EXPLAIN IT A QUADRUPLE SUICIDE YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!!!!!!!! BAKURA WOULD HAVE NEVER DONE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was depressing.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOO I HTE YOUUU!!!!!!!
Making me CRY like that
you're SOOOOOOOOO MEAN!!!!!!!!!
Making me CRY like that
you're SOOOOOOOOO MEAN!!!!!!!!!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT HON!!! great job!!
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww this was such a great fic! Angst prdie! Even though they all died it was optimistic of you to have it so they all do meet up one day, though youd think that they would go to the window before he stepped out! but yeah your a good writer, this is some of the best angst i have seen!
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was the best fanfic I have ever read~! ^_^ Keep it up!
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR GOD DAM THOS SON OF A BITCHS ILL TEAR THEM APART oh um author dont get me wrong im not mad at u just yugi and ryou's "parents" YA PARENTS HUH ILL SHOW THEM PARENTS BLACK RED DRAGON
BRD:yes u rang sister
RD:YES I DID GET MY WEPEONS AND YOURS TO WERE HUNTING PARENTS TONIGHT TWO CERTAIN PARENTS BY THE FUCKING NAME AS BOSHI AND YATEN OR WHATEVER THE BASTARD CALLED HIMSELF
BRD:O.O;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; oh my ^____^;;;;;;; sure id be happy to*snaps her fingers and a million and a half racks of wepeons from every country and every time period appeared they bothe graped all they could carry and brought the others with them by trucks* ooooooooh boshikins yatenii were are u
Y&B:OO;;;;;;;;;;; er nowere*start runing like mad only to have a solid wall made of forty layers of heavly condensed metal so they can scope nor go through and turn around with pure terror in their eyes as bothe RD and BRD came down on them and u here screams of blood curdling bone chilling pain that was so bad even set and satan would be afraid of it while u here comments such as "take this u bastards"and "this is what u get for hurting yugi and ryou and always getting your digusting way"and "and this goes double for forcing yami to do that to ryou u sick bastards"and of course"DIE DIE DIE U BASTARDS DIE FEEL THE PAIN U CAUSED YOUR SONS THATS RIGHT TAKE IT U BASTARDS TAKE IT LIKE THE DOGS U ARE U BASTARDS DIE DIE DIE DIE"
RD:whew well thats all for now and it looks like our "guests"are worn our for now but we will finish our "fun"later MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
BRD:my gosh that actually was an evil cackle ^_____________^ im SO PROUD but yes this was fun well thats all for now right boys
Y&B:X__X
BRD&RD:thats what we thought well again later author TTFN ta ta for now
BRD:yes u rang sister
RD:YES I DID GET MY WEPEONS AND YOURS TO WERE HUNTING PARENTS TONIGHT TWO CERTAIN PARENTS BY THE FUCKING NAME AS BOSHI AND YATEN OR WHATEVER THE BASTARD CALLED HIMSELF
BRD:O.O;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; oh my ^____^;;;;;;; sure id be happy to*snaps her fingers and a million and a half racks of wepeons from every country and every time period appeared they bothe graped all they could carry and brought the others with them by trucks* ooooooooh boshikins yatenii were are u
Y&B:OO;;;;;;;;;;; er nowere*start runing like mad only to have a solid wall made of forty layers of heavly condensed metal so they can scope nor go through and turn around with pure terror in their eyes as bothe RD and BRD came down on them and u here screams of blood curdling bone chilling pain that was so bad even set and satan would be afraid of it while u here comments such as "take this u bastards"and "this is what u get for hurting yugi and ryou and always getting your digusting way"and "and this goes double for forcing yami to do that to ryou u sick bastards"and of course"DIE DIE DIE U BASTARDS DIE FEEL THE PAIN U CAUSED YOUR SONS THATS RIGHT TAKE IT U BASTARDS TAKE IT LIKE THE DOGS U ARE U BASTARDS DIE DIE DIE DIE"
RD:whew well thats all for now and it looks like our "guests"are worn our for now but we will finish our "fun"later MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
BRD:my gosh that actually was an evil cackle ^_____________^ im SO PROUD but yes this was fun well thats all for now right boys
Y&B:X__X
BRD&RD:thats what we thought well again later author TTFN ta ta for now