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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!! Nice chappy and long too ^_-
Um... i wanted to point out what u typed '"Masa el khir, Shadi?"
Well .. i dont mean to ude ude or anything but that means "Gooningning"
If u wanted to say "how are you , shadi ?" then its like this "Shloonik shadi?" or "Izayak, shadi?"
and if u wanted any othelp jlp just tell me I'm Arabian ya know =^.^= and keep
up the good work i reeeeeally like ur story !!! ja ne !!
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June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice little twist you threw to the story...so Bakura and Yami and Seto and Shadi are all brothers. I liked that, lol. This is a really good story..and I like how you portray your knowledge of Egypt into it. I knew Seto's fatehr was cruel and vicious towards him, but damn. Add another chappie soon please...this si a really good story!
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whee, I'm so glad you updated! This fic just keeps getting better and better! I loved the little humourous bits you put in ("Does he growl at you a lot?" ::laughs:: Poor Kaiba Corp employees! ^^;;)
I also love the way you have Seto and Jounouchi interact as well, it's just perfect! Ahh, Mokuba's such a cool kid. He knows his big brother's been dreaming about a certain puppy for ::cough:: quite some time ::giggles::
Really great also how you're managing to weave in all the stuff about their previous lives. I appreciate the limeiness of this chapter as well! ^_~
Keep up the great work! ^__^
I also love the way you have Seto and Jounouchi interact as well, it's just perfect! Ahh, Mokuba's such a cool kid. He knows his big brother's been dreaming about a certain puppy for ::cough:: quite some time ::giggles::
Really great also how you're managing to weave in all the stuff about their previous lives. I appreciate the limeiness of this chapter as well! ^_~
Keep up the great work! ^__^
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
XD YYH Xover-ish thing~! LOL!
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Ooooooo
YD: Got that right!
DD: This is REALLY good!
YD: Please write more soon!
YD: Got that right!
DD: This is REALLY good!
YD: Please write more soon!
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice touch on adding the beautfiul Kurama to your fic! Joey and Seto need ot be together. As always, yet another excellent chapter. Your style of writing and your wording of the characters thoughts, feelings and past lives are exceptional! Please update more soon!
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yea babby! more baby more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
=^_^= Hey, nod! Id! In truth I did want to see more.... And as if Joey, everyone knows that if you even lay a hand on his fox you'd find it missing the next morning! =^_^;; Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing more soon, k? Ja!
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I found some names, but I think they might be a little stupid, but i tried...
ADOLF= German
Pronounced: A-dawlf
Modern form of the Germanic name Adalwolf, which meant "noble wolf" from the Germanic elements adal meaning "noble" and wulf. Association with Adolf Hitler has lessened the use of this name. He was the leader of the fascist Nazi party in Germany during World War II.
DORIAN: Means either or both "from Doris," or "from the sea."
CARADOC: meaning beloved.
Those were all I could thinf of, I know that they suck but oh well.
ADOLF= German
Pronounced: A-dawlf
Modern form of the Germanic name Adalwolf, which meant "noble wolf" from the Germanic elements adal meaning "noble" and wulf. Association with Adolf Hitler has lessened the use of this name. He was the leader of the fascist Nazi party in Germany during World War II.
DORIAN: Means either or both "from Doris," or "from the sea."
CARADOC: meaning beloved.
Those were all I could thinf of, I know that they suck but oh well.
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May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::stares in awe::
Wow, what a wonderful, wonderful story! I love these ancient Egyptian fics and I adore what you're doing with Jounouchi's previous life! There are only two parts to this fic, but already I'm eager to see more! It's written in such a way in that it grips your attention right from the start and the words judt flow together so well...I love it! I can't wait until you update again and I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this story! ^__^
Wow, what a wonderful, wonderful story! I love these ancient Egyptian fics and I adore what you're doing with Jounouchi's previous life! There are only two parts to this fic, but already I'm eager to see more! It's written in such a way in that it grips your attention right from the start and the words judt flow together so well...I love it! I can't wait until you update again and I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this story! ^__^