rate_review Reviews

great chapter
I loved it!
I hope you do more soon

I just wanted to let you know....your story rocks! I was following your previous story(with a co-author) and one of the reasons I love your stories so much is that they show the depths of your research-which is always a plus-and you aren't afraid to let the couples have conflicts. I think that's very important-and realistic. True, love is all good and fine, but one is able to know how *much* in love a couple is by seeing how they deal with the conflicts between them....Thanks for that.
Just a little correction, though...the word for "silver" in japanese is "Gin"...it and the word for gold "Kin" are very similar....so you might want to revise your title a little...hope I haven't offended you with that...Apart from that, keep up the good work! I want more, more I tell you!!!!^_^

Oh man, talk about never saw that comming! Please give me more? I can' t stand the suspence!

This is one amazing reincarnation story. You've done everything right and I have yet to see any errors of any sort. Bravo!

Yumi: Don't tell me you didn't like that chapter, Hikari
Yuji: I like it! I like it! Um well I'm all into past life things but...make Jahi leave Joey alone!!!
Yumi: You can't make the author do what you say
Yuji: But
Yumi: No!
Yuji: Ok but if you don't update as quick as possible I'll just annoy you!! But if you do update quicker I'll just annoy myi!
i!
Yumi: Hey why me!! Don't annoy me!
Yuji: Your fic is soooooooooooo CUTE!!!
Yumi: Ok Hikari promise today no more cute
Yuji: NO!!
Yumi: Why?
Yuji: Not telling! UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!
Yumi: I beg you Hikari don't annoy me
Yuji: Annoying is my only threat to make authors update quicker!! And trust me I can annoy!!
Yumi: My sanity is still trying to hold

Yay, an update! ::bounces:: I'm feeling far too tired and braindead at the moment to give a properly encouraging and most of all, coherent review, but I will say this. Noa (past and present version) is a total tosser, buuut I'm very interested to see what he's going to do now that he's in possession of the eye.

Yay for Rishid/Malik! ::waves banner:: And dear me, poor Bakura! And poor Yami as well! Nobody wants to be related to him, it seems!

I can't wait to read the next chapter about this talk between Jounouchi and Kaiba. I'm also intrigued by tay tay that Jounouchi's other self seems to keep trying to take over.

Oh yeah, and Mokuba kicks arse, but we all know that, right? ^_~

As always, great work! ^__^

please continue!!! I really like this story!

Yuji: OMIGOD!! If you don't hurry up and update quickly I'm going to freak out!
Yumi: Hikari, it sounds like you liked it
Yuji: Yeah that is so cool I'm going to read it again
Yumi: Getting carried away aren't we
Yuji: No that was really good. If you don't update and give me the happiness of reading more I'll cry for real
Yumi: You cry?
Yuji: YES!!
Yumi: Please update if she cries I have to comfort her and that's not easy

You have a wounderful story going on here, but you do havfew few problems.

One you need to cheack the grammer. Don't worry I know how much of a pain it is.

Second, try mixing dialog and discriptions together insted of doing them sepret.

Third, some back round information on characters wouldn't be a bad idea either. It helps those who might not now the show all that well get a more indepth understanding of whats going on.

I don't know why I didn't review before but it's NOA! ^__^ He's the PERFECT bad guy! In the series, he was obssessed with Seto! Wanted to own everything Kaiba owned and wanted what Kaiba wanted. Even brainwashed Mokuba! ^__^ HE's the PERFECT villian! (as the episodes on DVD)

I can't wait until the next part! I shall be waiting! Take your time, your writing skills are as refined as ever!

Geuna~