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person Yaky
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
CREEPY but very interesting. I have to admitt this is the fist fic I read about Joey&Seto this way gotta U m U man it's REALLY,REALLY,REALLY INTERESTING keep going can't wait for the next chapter C U Soon please keep the evil spirits out they just creep me out yes I understand they were in luv but taking over someone's body that is just EVIL other than that I lUV IT Specialy that Noa is the holder of the millenium EYE one concern though please let them be happy they diserve it poor SETO&JOEY they have gone through enough they won't B killed will they if they are I WILL BE VERY MAD other than that I LIKE IT PLEASE HURRY !!!!!!!

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E-mail me when you update thanx>>LUV U ^___^
person Becky
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
Take your time, it's us that should be thanking you for such a great story.
person Rayne
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is sa gra great fic!! I absolutely love it!! I can not wait to find out what happens next!!
person dreamer
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! That was absolutely beautiful!!! That last part with joey and seto. I loved it. I just wish that jahi wouldn't be so mean!!! His time is over. Its time for him to move on. It was a surprise for me to find out that duke was pegasus lover. But thinking it through it makes sense. I can't wait to see what keeps happening now with jahi and joey and what happens when noa comes into the scene. Update soon!!! I love it.
person Li
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this fic is SOOO good! I totally lost track of time as I was reading it. The plot is developed soo well, although I was confused with the difference in names at first, I was able to quickly catch on, because of the way you wrote them. I hope you update soon, cuz this fic is unbelievable. GREAT JOB!!
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh DEAR GOD!!! this is getting HOT!!! I love the story!
person Carmella
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is great contiue please?
person dreamer
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! You finally updated!!! Anyway, i think that all the things that are happening are great. I always wanted to know more about how their past lives vould be. But whats g ong on with jahi? Why can't he just let joey live his life? Its true what seferet said, their time has passed, its time to let other people live. I have a bad feeling about this. I don't think jahi understands that yet. That seems to be an issue with him. I hope seto or seferet, which ever, can make him understand before he causes trouble. Its not fair for him to be stealing joeys life. Also, hopefully everyone will learn to get along better. Yami and bakura have some issues they need to work out if they are going to work together in peace. Anyway, update again soon. Take care, see ya!
person Angel
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*stares, unable to comprehend the fact that she has yet to review* Hehe.... Anyways, I love this story. I wish there were more stories like this. I mean, this is so good, and I can't wait until thxt cxt chapter. I'm in suspense, I want to know what's gonna happeontiontinue and you should start writing original stories, unless you have and I haven't read your stories, then I'll look for them or something... Anyways, I have to go, and great job, keep going! Bye.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: That was SO good!
DD: Please don't take too long updating!
YD: PLEASE!!!