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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really hate how you ended this chapter. I was so...how could I say this, half disappointed, the other half of really really loved it! Don't'cha just hate when that happens?
I ry cay can't wait for the next chapter and I just realized I haven't reviewed. This is just sad. I hate when people read my stories and don't review and here I do the same things. Hypocrite here!
I don't want to go on and on, so continue soon! Really love this story and I hate cliffhangers!!! Arrg!!
Bye! Great story and chapter!
Kiyteoura.
I ry cay can't wait for the next chapter and I just realized I haven't reviewed. This is just sad. I hate when people read my stories and don't review and here I do the same things. Hypocrite here!
I don't want to go on and on, so continue soon! Really love this story and I hate cliffhangers!!! Arrg!!
Bye! Great story and chapter!
Kiyteoura.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was certainly an enthralling chapter. And, it left me wondering so many things. Like: the Angle shrine, the meeting between Seto and Noa, and the duel with the ending; It seems that those blue green eyes do not belong to Jou. God, please tell me it’s Jou not Jahi…please! But, I tell you that was one hof aof a chapter. And I can’t wait for the next one!
LATER…
LATER…
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dreams of pain in a past life, leading to pain in this life. i love the concept. This is a great begining. I can't wait to see whta the two boys dream. Waiting for the cha chapter.
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! You updated! OMG!!!!!!!Jahi won!? OMG!!!!!I can't stop thinking OMG!!!! Please update soon, i think i stopped breathing. Jahi had his days, it's Joey's body, blasted! (Note: breathe, damnit!) Ok, very suspenseful chapter, thank you.
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yo, Blah@darkhorse.net (if that's a real addy),
You are an idiot... but thank you for entertaining me and my friends... we needed something to do on a cold and blustery morning. Personally, I was laughing at this over and over last night. Though I have to admit it was one of the better written flames I have gotten. And please, do not doubt my quality or professionalism. I have been published three times in fanzines and twice in magazines outside fandom. I have received compliments for the amount of corrections the editors do not have to make. I have been lectured and taught grammar from the time I was a child by my mother who is an English teacher. I have recently been tested on an Adult Basic Education Test which was needed to get into another school... I passed with the highest score in Reading, Language, and Math Application and Computation. I also have 3 years at an Accredited College. In short your pathetic attempt to damage my ego had the opposite effect. It shows instead a bias and rude mind such as yours can not accept or understand well-written, well-plotted fiction.
Now as to the other claims you have made, I have studied extensively several religions, both on my own and for class... Now I have noticed that several people have held dear and correct some very common misassumptions. It really isn't their fault, rather it's what they were taught and since they never explored deeper they don't realize that it has long since been proven wrong. It is understandable that you, as one likely in the majority of the people I am speaking about, do not know that your ASSumptions are wrong. That's ok. I forgive you.
To end, thank you for this opportunity to speak on this. Now I must go and finish part 10. I foresee this continuing to perhaps 17 or 18 chapters, after which I have planned two sequels.
You are an idiot... but thank you for entertaining me and my friends... we needed something to do on a cold and blustery morning. Personally, I was laughing at this over and over last night. Though I have to admit it was one of the better written flames I have gotten. And please, do not doubt my quality or professionalism. I have been published three times in fanzines and twice in magazines outside fandom. I have received compliments for the amount of corrections the editors do not have to make. I have been lectured and taught grammar from the time I was a child by my mother who is an English teacher. I have recently been tested on an Adult Basic Education Test which was needed to get into another school... I passed with the highest score in Reading, Language, and Math Application and Computation. I also have 3 years at an Accredited College. In short your pathetic attempt to damage my ego had the opposite effect. It shows instead a bias and rude mind such as yours can not accept or understand well-written, well-plotted fiction.
Now as to the other claims you have made, I have studied extensively several religions, both on my own and for class... Now I have noticed that several people have held dear and correct some very common misassumptions. It really isn't their fault, rather it's what they were taught and since they never explored deeper they don't realize that it has long since been proven wrong. It is understandable that you, as one likely in the majority of the people I am speaking about, do not know that your ASSumptions are wrong. That's ok. I forgive you.
To end, thank you for this opportunity to speak on this. Now I must go and finish part 10. I foresee this continuing to perhaps 17 or 18 chapters, after which I have planned two sequels.
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods stop writing this shit! I could forgive you if you sent out this drivel and never wrote again, but you had to inflict more chapters of this diarrhea on the unsuspecting populous. This is the worst shit I've ever read, and I've read alot of it. I'd rank this a -5 on any scale. You have no talent, no skill, and no clue as to what you're doing. Stop wasting time and net space with this meaningless puke. You should have your fingers broken for even thinking about continuing this. You have no grasp of the English language, or any language alive or dead, written or not. Nor do you have an idea of cultures. Do reseach before you write. The less research you do the more of an ass you look like. If you know you have problems with writing that even a beta can't fix, for gods sakes don't send it out for other people to read. Stop wrg ing in general. The fan fiction realm will thank you.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was hoping that you would post this soon!! I read the unbeta'd version on your site the other day!! This is wonderful!! Can't wait to read the next chappie!!!
Lady Elfskye
Lady Elfskye
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there long time no see! GREAT update by the way ^_^!!!
Noa, I love the little dead guy, he's evil *grins* Yep...!
Joey and Jahi dueling hmm... this should be very interesting, very indeed!
Can't wait for the next cahpter so Plz hurry...
LATER...
Noa, I love the little dead guy, he's evil *grins* Yep...!
Joey and Jahi dueling hmm... this should be very interesting, very indeed!
Can't wait for the next cahpter so Plz hurry...
LATER...
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, another chapter!!! oh, wonder who will win, jou or jahi.... hope they tie or something..... wonder if they will ever learn to cope...
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello ^_^!!! It's nice to see hear from you, I've been waiting impatiently, I 'red' the story over 2 over times, it's just SOOOOO GOOD!!!
(I'm sorry, I'm a bit more emotional, since I'm pregnant, yep gonna have a baby. actually just found out, I'm 3 1/2 weeks, I'm so excited!!!! So if I seem rather emotional I have an excuse) PWEASE continue soon, poor my puppy I HOPE HE DOESN'T LOOSE!!!!!
UPDATE SOON, BYE ^_____^
(I'm sorry, I'm a bit more emotional, since I'm pregnant, yep gonna have a baby. actually just found out, I'm 3 1/2 weeks, I'm so excited!!!! So if I seem rather emotional I have an excuse) PWEASE continue soon, poor my puppy I HOPE HE DOESN'T LOOSE!!!!!
UPDATE SOON, BYE ^_____^