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person Kitsune
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yayayayay! Great chapter and awesome ending!!! ^^
person black fox\'s phonix
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
to say that I was impressed by this story is to give it to little weight. I truly love this beautiful story you've written, in fact it is on par with some of the best fanfiction I have read and not to mention one of my favorites. The only problem is you need to add new chapter more often = ) ! Ill be looking forward to it.
person DarkQueen
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times I tell you, but I do-I love your story!
You may hear this all the time, because you are a great writer, not only do you put your all into the story, but you inform us about other cultures, etc. I expect no less from you then the best, keep it up, because I can't seem to find the words to tell you how great it is! Now, I have to go, before I embarrass my self.
LATER...
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! New Chappie!! And as always wonderful!! Kura and Tris. Lovely!!! More soon!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous read! Please update soon!
person Terry
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The updates to this story always makes my day better. Although they're far and few, they're worth it! I love how you end on such a scuh a climax to start the next chapter. I hope you update soon!
person DarkQueen
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
W ano another long awaited chapter, and better than ever. Fo a minute, I thought that Joey was going to be angry, but how could he; he loves, Seto, right? Well, I think so! Moreover, that "thing" with Joey's father is somewhat creepy; I do wonder, what Seto said: "Who ever is doing this, could use Mr. Wheeler." (Bit of a summarize.) And then, there is Tristans' behavior; I usually like him, but now, man, he is just being an ass. Awe, I love Joey and Seto fighting, do not know why though…kind of weird, huh? Well, another great chapter; Keep up the great work, and update when you can.
LATER...
person Rayne
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After such a long wait, you leave it there!?! I'm going to lose the small remained of my sanity wondering what's next!!! Please HURRY with the next chapter!!!!
person Saelbu
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good. Update soon I want to read more. ^_^
person Reshef
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I enjoyed the fact that someone finally gave Joey a persona other than a silly mutt hanging around solely as the brawns of Yugi's fanclub. You built a complete story. It wasn't just about sex, there was an actual plot other than Seto/Yugi/Yami/Tristan/Duke trying to get him into bed. Thanks for really turning Joey into a 3D character with more on his mind than sex, and dueling. Thanks for shifting the viewpoint to show his internal struggles rather than Yugi or Yami or Seto. I love you, man.