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person Fae of Heaven - The Customized Landscape
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing.... Tristan feels something for Joey?
person lupusdragon
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Well, it is obvious... Tristan is not using Italian anymore. Right K?
Karen: *sobbing*
LD: O.o oh well, I guess she won't be saying anything. I am sure that she thinks it is sad... judging froe ree reaction. Personally, I think Tristan is being a dope. He needs help, not to force himself on Seto, though I suppose I can understand why he is doing just that. *Huggles Tristan* It will be alright. Seto love you Tristan, you guys will get through it. Right, K?
Karen: *still sobbing, nods*
person RavenWings
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* *grabs a tissue* *wipes eyes and nose* *sniffle* You wrote that very well hun! *sniffle* Tecknecilly... Trist just raped Seto... Seto didn't want it so that means it was rape! O.O *shrugs just right shoulder* I hurt my left so *repeats last shrug* Well you did great! Just cause I quit my writings doesn't mean you can start lacking off on yours hun! KEEP ON TYING!!! ^ ^ You're doing great on all your stories! Ja hun! Loves from Saa Ra AKA (for only you! ^ ^) Doll Face.
person Yue
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He's not speaking Italian anymore... *sniffles* Maybe he can't feel anything 'cause he's blocking out a part of himself? Ohhh, I hope everything turns out ok! And will we get to see Jounouchi get together with Yami no Bakura? Pleasepleasepleeeease?
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...if he can't feel anything...maybe its not emotional that he's not feeling. He hasn't called Seto Amante. He did say he loved him, but those are easy words to say. AHHHH!! he still doesn't trust Seto fully!!!! He started to, but with Brad's betrayal, he can't trust anyone he loves anymore. And since his "love" of Joey is friendship, same with Yami & Yugi, he can trust them. But he can't bring himself to trust Seto and *without trust there is no love*!

Ahhhhhh...Gods!! Poor Seto, Poor Tris!!!! You gotta keep writing!!!!! I can't wait!!!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My my my... and I thought my story was angsty.... oh well... I love it anyway... plus ::whispers to Tristian 'I kinda know how you feel':::
person Dragon\'s Girl
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tris hasn't told Seto that he loves him! *cries in corner* I LOVE YOU, SETO!!!!!
person zatken
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ay....you guys made me cry again.... Geez, I can't help but keep thinking about what he said. That he could not "feel anything" anymore... That's just sad.

Psycho Brad should suffer more in the Shadow Realm!

Keep updating, guys. I love, love, love your stories :-D
person sourastherain
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tristan hasn't called Seto "amante".

Hurry with the next chapter, can't wait.
person gralnak
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
keep it up
:)gralnak

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