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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great I will be waiting for the last and final chapter!
Great STORY!!!!
Great STORY!!!!
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GO SETO AND TRIS!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwwwwww............Bakura needs some lovin'? *drags Bakura into the broom closet at the soap shop. After hours pass, Bakurasgirl comes out.* That should take care of Bakura's much-needed lovin.
awwwwwwwww............Bakura needs some lovin'? *drags Bakura into the broom closet at the soap shop. After hours pass, Bakurasgirl comes out.* That should take care of Bakura's much-needed lovin.
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
W00t!!! WOW!!! *cheers* It's all good again!! It's GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!! *bounces* I'm hyper!! (I have to go back to school now, though....T.T)
GO BAKU!!! *cheers again* Oh yeah!!! Give him his lemon, ladies. Come on, be nice to the poor dear.... ^_^
Till next chapter!! ^_^
~KK =^.^=/KJ/NG
GO BAKU!!! *cheers again* Oh yeah!!! Give him his lemon, ladies. Come on, be nice to the poor dear.... ^_^
Till next chapter!! ^_^
~KK =^.^=/KJ/NG
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter! Good good lemon from our two pairs. And psycho Brad is gone (finally, the bastard). And Tristan's almost back to normal (yipee!)
Thanks, guys, for letting me know of chapter updates :-D Hope the married life, and the shop, are going well as always ;-D
Luv lots, Zatken
Thanks, guys, for letting me know of chapter updates :-D Hope the married life, and the shop, are going well as always ;-D
Luv lots, Zatken
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Go Tris!!! Go Kura!!! Go Joey!! Go Seto!! GO DDYD!!!!!!! Oh Wow!! Bakura hopefully will get some soon! Or are ya planning another story????? Hmm....
Anyways!! Way to go! Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Lady Elfskye
Anyways!! Way to go! Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Lady Elfskye
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY!!!
WOW, everything I wrote in my last review happened!!! sorta. HEHEHEHEEHHEHEHEHEHE!! i thought it was gonna be the last chappie and as i was reading the lemon, which was excelent, i was so happy that tris was back to normal, but at the same time i was like nooo!!! it's gonna be over!!. BUT NOW I'M GETTING ANOTHER!!! yea!!!! soooooooooo, either in the next chappie, there should be lotsa Joey/Bakura action, or you gotta write a sequel. HEHEHE.
I have one thing that isn't really a critisism or whatever, just a request. Joey gave in too easily. in my opinion, in the next chappie, if you include a lot about them, joey should still fight it but obviously lose. (duh) hehee. I can see it now. "Do you want it?" "No." *grope* "Do you want it?" "NO!" *stroke* "Do you want it?" "Oh, God yes,"
HEHEHEHEHE!!! i amuse me!! lol, you never need to listen to my requests if you don't wanna. you are the creator!!!!
GREAT CHAPPIE! LOVIES!
WOW, everything I wrote in my last review happened!!! sorta. HEHEHEHEEHHEHEHEHEHE!! i thought it was gonna be the last chappie and as i was reading the lemon, which was excelent, i was so happy that tris was back to normal, but at the same time i was like nooo!!! it's gonna be over!!. BUT NOW I'M GETTING ANOTHER!!! yea!!!! soooooooooo, either in the next chappie, there should be lotsa Joey/Bakura action, or you gotta write a sequel. HEHEHE.
I have one thing that isn't really a critisism or whatever, just a request. Joey gave in too easily. in my opinion, in the next chappie, if you include a lot about them, joey should still fight it but obviously lose. (duh) hehee. I can see it now. "Do you want it?" "No." *grope* "Do you want it?" "NO!" *stroke* "Do you want it?" "Oh, God yes,"
HEHEHEHEHE!!! i amuse me!! lol, you never need to listen to my requests if you don't wanna. you are the creator!!!!
GREAT CHAPPIE! LOVIES!
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hooray for Bakura and Joey!
:)GRALNAK
:)GRALNAK
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You big mushball romantic....
I like the part where you kill people.
he he he he
I don't have issues at all.
How's your wife...didn't kill herself yet did she?
I like the part where you kill people.
he he he he
I don't have issues at all.
How's your wife...didn't kill herself yet did she?
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Almost sad this is almost at an end....but what a wonderful chapter, as always....
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was eat eat story I can to if Tritan is going to feel again
Please continue...I'll read it I promised!!
Please continue...I'll read it I promised!!