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by Mellybean

person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dragondreamer lovely fic deary but im afraid u are EXSTREAMLY DEAD IN SO MANY WAYS BEYOND WHAT U CAN COMPREHEND so were to begin but first ill let u finish the story before i do so your safe for now well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW
person KC\'s Yami (KC)
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami: *playing Dark Vader music from Star Wars* Guess who it is! I'm your host for the review!!! My aibou is out doing something. probably buying some lubricant or condom. *blushes* are both of them the same thing? Anywayz, my aibou will be happy that u've updated!!! GOOD THING I DIDN'T SEND U TO THE SHADOW RHELM YET!!! BUT U DIDN'T UPDATED STRONGER THAN BEFORE!!! DAMN U!!! *growls* i'm getting frustrated cause aibou isn't home yet and i'm lonely. PLEASE CONTINUE CAUSE I THINK THAT'S WHAT MY AIBOU WILL WRITE!!! PLEASE!!!
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn skippy they'd better!
person bakurasgirl
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*drools uncontrollably and dies of dehydration caused by excessive drooling* mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..................Joey x Bakura..............................................................................*dies a second death from hotness overload*
person Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: All together now....
Jams, Neko Jounouchi and Chibi Yugi Plushie: AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
Seto Plushie: Oh brother... ::glares at Dragon and Yami Dragon:: Are you quite finished having Tristan screw my brains out?
Neko Jounouchi: Prob'ly not! But now it's my turn!! ::jumps Seto Plushie::
Seto Plushie: Gyah!!!
person pikosama
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this story very much.
person pvt beavis666
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great ending to the story. please make a sequel.
person IYYashi
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Tony? Who's Tony? I don't remember any Tony?
Yumi: How can someone love that son of a bitch(Brad)?! The guy most have been crazy or drunk!!
Yuji: Calm down
Yumi: Hikari, I can't you know how I hate son of a bitches!
Yuji: I know. But you always die or get in trouble
Yumi: Yeah!
Yuji: I hope you make a seqeal or an update or however it's going to be but I hope you make it soon.
person ChocolateCoveredPeaches
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have one thing to say...BRAD HAWKES IS A WILD WHORE!!! much like Midvalley from Trigun ^^ anyway awesome sotry from beginning to end...but I want a sequel...want one sooo BAD!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow~ Whatta man! Who woulda thunk that Kura could be such a softie? Rrrowww!! GO Tris!!! Go Seto!! Du duh da dun!! Here come the grooms!!! Oh yeah!! Man whatta ending!! Now I have two reasons for you to update Stronger, not that I want it to end, but damn, leaving us at a cliffie like that is not nice!! LOL!! WOW!!! Go DDYD!!! You ROCK!!

Lady Elfskye

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