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for One Way Street

by Mellybean

person lupusdragon
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Aww poor little Tristan * snickers *
Karen: LD, that is not very nice. He is emotionally scarred. He needs love and reassurence.
LD: It is still amusing, in a very angsty sort of way.
Karen: *sigh* I am never going to change you, am I?
LD: ^_________^ Nope!
person kay
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whaaa.. jbcaubcause seto was on top doesnt mean he was in controll...anyways this is gettign interesting...uhh dont make any more fluffy chapters please...though this one was a little bittersweet...hehe...good job
person psyienna
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love Kaiba fanfics- I had never imagined this combination, but you did a great job with the pairing- please write more!
person bakurasgirl
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww......poor tristan and seto.....*hugs seto and tristan plushies*. It's not often you see tristan plushies!
person bluesummers
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW!
even though I never listen to reviewers who say this, you must or I will go insane.
:)BLUESUMMERS & YAMIGRALNAK
person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Wow... That was good... It's getting br anr and better!
Neko Jounouchi: Yeah and we even learned some Italian. ^^
Jams: "Ti amo".... I gotta remember that. ^^ ::gives Dragon and Yami Dragon lots of Seto and Yugi plushie (cuz she already gave up all the Tristan 1s^^)::
Neko Jounouchi: ::glomps Dragon and Yami Dragon:: Keep it up! ^^
Seto Plushie: ::Thwacks self over the head with the frying pan:: X_________x
Jams: O___o ::sarcastically:: Oh the poor baby....
person Keysha
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn Seto..why didn't you tell Tristan it was your first time?!? Seto no baka. I'm sure Tristan woul dhave taken it easy on him had he known...why did he reject Tristan like that? Okay you two, no fighting over the plushies! *hands out extra Seto and Tristan plushies* Now you both have one of each. Please add more soon...I love this story!
person EVIL MJ
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, If anyone should be writing a story about control issues it's YOU!!! Ha.. I should leave my e-mail address so people can write me for your past history. I think you did a pretty good job of it, nothing sappy and sweet going on which as you know would cause my eyesrollroll back in my head and bring about the onset of a migraine headache. I meant what I said when I thought your writing had matured.

The rubber chicken was impressed and wanted to tell you that he felt that your banter with the characters before the story was amusing and he liked it..keep it up you pile of sticks.

person Lunara Moonbeam
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* t's about time someone did a yaoi about Seto and Tristen.
Augustin: But Seto is mine!
-.-; Augustin. Seto belongs to many. Not just you.
Claudius: *nods* But Augustin can't take rejection that well.
I love the story and as thanks for making it, I give my yaoi Seto and Tristen Chibis!
Chibi Seto: *glomps Tristen* ^^
Chibi Tristen: *kisses Seto* ^^
See? They love their larger selves! Enjoy the chibis! Much more fun than plushies!
person bluesummers
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just sigup uup under the pen name bluesummers, I'll still post on mm.org, but I want there to be another site, if mm.org gives me trouble.
:)GRALNAK

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