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for One Way Street

by Mellybean

person Zatken
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my golly....how can one read this awesome story and NOT talk about the meat?! I was laughing and rolling on the floor with Joey's reaction when he caught Tristan and Seto at the kitchen - and afterwards being teased.... Ay, what a classic.... Please continue writing :-D
person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Oh hell Tristan's in trouble now!!!
Neko Jounouchi: You can say that again.
Seto Plushie: Is it just me or are they torturing me more than usual?
Neko Jounouchi: ::glomps Seto Plushie:: It's just you. XD
Seto Plushie: Somehow I knew you would say that. u.u
person zatken
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my golly...this story's goood....and I feel sooo bad for Seto, after all he'd been through...


Keep writing :-D
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOO...Joey x Bakura!!! you HAVE to put that in there!!! mmm...joey x ryou x bakura.....mmm..so hot...
person Psyienna
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Your trio of fics- One Way Street, Stronger Than Before, and Friends & Lovers- has really shaped my opinion of Tristan and where he fits into the YGO universe. I think one of the best parts of this fic is your portrayal of Mokuba. So many authors underdevelop him as a character, using him as Seto's "window dressing", but you've given Mokuba a charm and charisma all his own. And this is JMO, but I think the Seto/Tristan story is so powerful and compelling that I'd rather see the developing Joey thread in another fi can can't wait to see what happens, so keep up the good work! ^_^
person lupusdragon
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: *wailing*
LD: That's it! Now I am pissed!
Karen: *sobbing* How would you do that to them? It was such a lovely chapter...
LD: Yeah, until Brad came into it. This is all his fault! Damn him. Damn Bakura too. *throwing random objects at the offending characters*
Karen: *hick* Please make it better!
LD: I like angst, really I do, but these stories are getting really depressing, almost as depressing as the time it takes for you to update *wink*
person kira
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you're evil. I love it, and I hate it, but its got a good plot. Its well written and besides the suspense almost perfect.
person EVIL MJ
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am only doing this to avoid the w .. .. or the barage of "where is my review" e-mails

I only have one complaint. I personally think Joey should have remained staright in this story. But hey I am only one evil demented voice in a sea heading in an opposite direction. Just proof that I can't go with the flow. I am sure you you your reasons and it will become apparent eventually.

I have given you a new name in the Kingdom of his holy Fowl......sister Cliff....keeper of the hangers ......
person EVIL MJ
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good stuff buddy. Kudos

If you feel that you cannot update this week perhaps you should cancel you plans ....he he kidding

You need to get in touch with your evil side and work on your other, other story....wait I am your evil side...!! sheesh!

Well, someday

See you at the BBQ, and don't forget to bring the cupcake ...sorry cakes....my bad
person bluesummers
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not be able to update next week....eh....?......hmmm
:)GRALNAK

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