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by Mellybean

person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Yay!! A wedding!!
Neko Jounouchi: I wanna go!! I wanna see Yami Dragon in a froofy white wedding dress!! ::falls:: XD
Seto Plushie: Do you wanna be backhanded? Yami Dragon you have my permission.
Neko Jounouchi: ::hides under Jams::
Jams: O.o ....... Anywho this is gettin goooood. Poor Twistan!! ::rescues Tristan and locks him in her closet:: ^___^
person lupusdragon
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: ^_^ I can't believe you actually emailed us because you did not get a review! That is so cool!
Karen: Yes, and congratulations. I am so happy for you.
LD: Now, if you must know, this whole chapter has me royally pissed off.
Karen: Yes, I understand Setos' reaction... however, Brad needs to die.
LD: Without a doubt.
Karen: *wicked grin* However, the bits with Bakura thinking about Joey helped to make up for the generally evilness of this chapter.
LD: Evilness is not a word.
Karen: Successful comunication.
LD: Whatever. Anyway... Can we at least give Brad a taste of the Shadow Realm? Pretty please?
Karen: ^__^
person Yaoilovergirl
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You both are sooooooo evil. I hate cliffhangers. Hate them..hate them...hate them...(get murderous glint in my eyes) HATE THEM...!!! (get whacked over the head by my girlfriend @_@).
Girlfriend of Yaoilover girl: Sorry, she's just a little short of sex these days... ^^
Yaoilovergirl: OI!!!'s y's your fault then if I'm this way...
G.f.: OOOOPS...by guys. Have to go...(runs away)
Ylg.: grmbl...anyway, please hurry with the next chapter..PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE!!!
person Peaches
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*eyes go wide* oh crap!! that was...really REALLY creepy. I really hope this story will be a happy ending. Cuz Seto and Tris r goign through alot of crap right now...very scary
person zatken
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God....not sure if I reviewed this last chapter (10) already, but I visited the site and read this last chapter. Then it dawned on me: if I was Kaiba, I will kill Tristan for doing that.

Poor Kaiba....ay....
person Fae of Heaven - The Customized Landscape
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tristan! :( *Huggles him and beats the shit out of Brad*

Continue!

So, could you explain to me the situation more? I'm not going to pass judgement on it, because I don't want to pass judgement on your happiness. Besides, nothing really could phase me in a negative way. =]
person Aten
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
CLIFFINESS!!! That was such a good cliffie!!! Poor Tristan...*hugs Tristan plushies*
Yup. the truth is out.
person Aten
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aishiteru, koibito yami.
person Foenyx (chick who never logs in)
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna guess that Tristan clutched Brad to pull him away....god I hope so...poor seto. *tear tear*
person Fae of Heaven - The Customized Landscape
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM

ristristan-genome: I'mma baaaaaaaaad boy.
Seto-genome: No ho-hos for you tonight.
Tristan-genome: *puppy dog eyes* Awwwwww! But he forced himself ON ME~!
Seto-genome: ... sure he did.
Tristan-genome: ... IT WAS RAPE! SEXUAL HARRASSMENT! SEX OFFENDOR! MOLESTOR! HELP!! *runs off screaming*
Seto-genome: ... hehehe, you're so cute when you get silly and say random things. *Pets Tristan's head*
Tristan-genome: *throws arms around Seto, and locks lips with Seto*
Seto-genome: Good boy, now time to play doggy... *Goes down on Tristan*
Tristan-genome: *Runs to get the "KY"*
Seto-genome: No need..*reaches in his pocket, and pulls out a fresh tube*
Tristan-genome: Grease me like a pig, baby...
Seto-genome: -s dos down curtain- Give us some privacy, eh?

-CENSORED-

Once again, good story. Keep up the good work...

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