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for One Way Street

by Mellybean

person lupusdragon
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Hooray!
LD: Brad was a good bad guy... though not as good a MJ. He lacks subtletKareKaren: *raises eyebrow* You are worried about subtlety? I am just glad Bakura got rid of him. Thank the gods.
person zatken
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Psycho Brad is dead - Shadow Realm style. I love this chapter, especially how cruel Seto was -- but of course, nobody beats Bakura in that department.

person Peaches
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay Brad is dead...wait or is that bad?? I'm confused @_@
person Suta
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review here. That just shows how much i like this one. And the fact that you having me likeing Tristan is a miracle. I usually hate him...almost as much as Tea.^^;; This fic is so good, please say there's another chapter!!!
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
o.O forgot to logout....oh well....*claps* Great chappie, baby! I think this is one of your best yet!
18 days left to Canada! YEAH FRIENDSHIP!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! NO! ANZU!

Anzu: getting your throat slashed is like friendship!
Bakurasgirl:Argh...why do youhave to say things that are so socially inappropriate??
Anzu: Being socially inappropriate...
Bakura: Kill me now.
Anzu: is like friendship!

Can I throw her out of the plane in Maine????

person Jams
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: yay a new chappie!!
Neko Jounouchi: Yuck!
Chibi Yugi Plushie: ::covers his eyes::
Seto Plushie: Now THAT'S what I call a good chapter!!
person Shnadowed Blade
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yup I knew it!! I knew Joey was gona do soing ing stupid that.(BTW they're no nerves in the hand that can do that, but there is one in the wrist :P )
person Lunara Moonbeam
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*claps* I heard it from Bakurasgirl and now you! I'm so happy for you guys! *has Brad tied and gagged* Oh and if you wnat, can deal with this little whelp.
Augustin: *has an evil grin and pounces on Brad* Free sex and meal in one? I'm liking the idea Lunara! But start working on that story with me and Seto! I want that finished! Don't wait for Leo to come back!
*glares* Chapter one needs some editing. Then chapter two needs the second rape scene finished! And plus you're the sacrifical lamb of the story. Getting raped by both Sephiroth AND Seto.
Augustin: -.-; Don't remind me, but the stuff with Sephiroth really happened! hen he left me for Nicky. *cries*
-.-; Oh boy. You got Seto, now get over it!
~Lunara~
person Keysha
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well you told everyone finally!!1 *cheers* CONGRATULATIONS!!! You guys have had my support since you trusted me enough to let me know ahead of everyone else, and I love and admire both of you for that. *blows a kiss* I wish you both the best of luck, and all the love and happiness in the world!!! *blows a kiss* As a matter of fact, I will write a sex phile for you guys as a gift. You tell me who you want to see together, and I will write it, no doubt. Let your koi know, o I I love you guys!

Now, for the story.

AWWWW DAMNNNNN!!!! Poor Tristan!!! And Seto... my beautiful, tortured CEO.... awww damn... I hope you guys update soon!!!!

*blows another kiss* I am sooooo happy for you two!!! Well, three, lol, and you know why.
person Evil MJ
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so evil I almost fell out of my chair. I loved it ...go Pegases you naughty pup, I just wanted to spank him.. ha ha

Tristan you are such an absolute dork. Lets invite him to stay over night and then expect him to do nothing....he needs to speak to a University aged woman and see what she has to say to that....BANG HEAD HERE TRISTAN!!!

Bakura, mayhem....*pant pant*...sorry lost myself there!!!

Congradulations on the upcoming handfasting....I just want to know one thing..
WHEN are you going to tell you parents....*falls out of chair laughing* sorry *gasp..wheeze* can I be there when you do ...*wipes tears away* no really, I think I can help ease the tension...bwaahhaaahhaaaahha!! Sorry, I am having a nervous breakdown today and thought you should come along with me.....

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