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Yuji: Poor Tristan!! That's soooooo sad!!!
Yumi: Stop your whining!! Anyway nice blood intake you must be really good at that. It was like bloody murder!
Yuji: That's not really the nice part, my Yami!!
Yumi: How do I stand you as my, Hikari
Yuji: I don't know but whatever. Hey! Please give Kaiba a break a ready it's really sad seeing Tristan like this just please make the next chapter more...CUTE!!
Yumi: Hikari!! If you don't shut up about cute things I will hurt you! And anyway I love suspence you don't have to rush if you want why not make Tristan open his stiches from stuggling to get away from Seto and lose more blood!
Yuji: *Hit her Yami HARD on the head* How can you say that those to love esch other!!!
Yumi: You can not tell the way that chap went!
Yuji: Your impossible! Anyway Pwetty Pwease update quicker! Pwease!
Yumi: I don't say that bull so I'll just say if you may update faster then you have been it would be much appreciated.

Jams: ::pats Joey and Tristan's heads:: Sorry boys can't do that. I still want them to write! ^.^
Neko Jounouchi: ::groans:: I have to wait again!!!
Seto Plushie: Oh don't get your panties in a bunch!
Neko Jounouchi: But I wanna know what happens next!!!

*wipes at tears* my babies..pooor oor Seto. Tris needs to trust him!
*waits for next chapie impatiently*

LD: *wacks Tristan and Joey* Now what would be the fun of asking YD & DD never to write again... I happen to like their writing. It un tun to torture the boys * grinning maliciously*
Karen: Wow, that was some good shit *giggle* Very angsty chapter, but not totally melodramatic... you are good with the balancing act. I love the bits of humor ^_^ That is good friends for you, joking with you even when you feel like shit.
LD: Blah, blah, blah, I don't care about the jokes, when are we going to get the Bakura/Joey action? I know it is coming dammit!
Karen: o.O Ooooooookaaaaay

awww...Tris, you should feel happy soe loe loves you as much as my tenshi! Great chappie, babe. I reviewed MJ, too! Poor Tris and Seto and Joey and Everyone......
*hugs naked RYou and bakura*

Bakura: Why do you feel like you HAVE to hug us naked???
Bakurasgirl: I don't see Ryou complaining....
Ryou: *sigh*
Bakurasgirl: See? He loves me....Besides...I love hugging you. I need someone to hug while my tenshi is so far away.
Ryou: *s* th* that's so sad!
Bakurasgirl: It's ok...we have a present for hern'tn't we.
Ryou: YUP! She'll love it......
Bakura: What do I get if i let you hug me naked?
Bakurasgirl: I'll let you have a nice lemon with Ryou soon in Anything for you.
*Bakura glomps Bakurasgirl* See? It works every time.

eagerly awaiting the next chappie!!!! Poor Seto! Man.............t het hell Tris has gone thru. Keep up th egood work!!

I usually make it a habit not to review until the end of a story (because even a story that starts great can take a turn for the worse), but I figure since this story has been able to keep my eyes locked on the screen since I began, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that'll you end it well and say "Good Job!" [and congrads :)]

I think the only thing I didnt like was how quickly Brad was gone. He was there, and then he was gone (though I did like how you got rid of him; serves him right, really). He could have made for some interesting conflicts... then again, who knows where you intend to take what he did, huh?

Anyway, like I said, good job thus far. Keep it up.

Well, That was certianly an intersting turn of events... so... when will Joey fully give into his feelings...

Hi :D

I really really really love this fic. Its developement had many surprises and I suppose it'll have even more ;).
I like Seto pairings :)
I love Bakura pairings :D -especially when they are with somebody like Joey :D - Waiting to see what happens :)

Thanks for the fic and good luck with the muses :)

OHH BAKURA...!!!!! he he *doing happy evil dance of Joy on her desk*

*pokes Brad with a pointy stick*

Seto you old sack of crap..didn't know you had it in you.

If this is what comes from the dentist I think you need to go more often (got the happy gas didn't you!!)

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