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awwwww......poor Tris. He really over did it.

Bakura: You're telling me......
BakurasgirO...O...Into the supply closet with you!
Bakura: Hah! You'll only have that supply closet anotanother three days! And you can't shove me under the desk! Now what are you gonna do??? *insane laughter*
Bakurasgirl: Simple. I'll stick you in my closet at the soap shop I'm opening with my wife. How would you like them apples???
Bakura:........
Bakuasgirl: thought so. Great chappie, baby!

Yuji: Poor Tristan! He shouldn't go through this
Yumi: He was raped what do you think
Yuji: It's to sad
Yumi: It can only get better
Yuji: Thank, Yami
Yumi: No problem Hikari
Yuji: Update Update Update
Yumi: Yes do what she says It's terrible when she's sad

Jams: Personal thi think I would have cut Brad's head off...
Seto Plushie: And she's NOT talking about the one on his shoulders! O.O
Neko Jounouchi: ::clutches himself and winces:: A fate worse than death! O___O
Jams: And Tristan is saying.... ::scratches head:: O.o
Seto Plushie: He's saying "I'm a twit!"
Jams: Tristan is NOT a pregnant goldfish Seto!

this is f***ing brilliant!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'd love to see what happens to Joey........mmmm.....Joey and Bakura..........
:)gralnak

"i laughed, i cried; it moved me, bob."

really; very moving. i anticipate the future. (wait, was that english?)

Hello, I just wanted to tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Both the "shower" scene and Tristian and Seto's first sexual encounter struck me as quite realistic. I could tell you both spent time planning the entire thing out, it was very well oragnized. I usually don't review stories unless I find them particularly well written, and I must say that I really liked it. The idea that Tristian and Seto would fight for dominance seemed some how perfect to me. My only criticism would be the idea that the doctor who treated Tristian after the rape wouldn't call the police. I would just think he'd be a little "weirded" out by treating someone who was in pretty bad condition in a residence. It's one thing to set a broken bone, quite anotho tro treat trauma like rape. And since both rape and assault are crimes, I would just think he'd contact someone. However, the story did end in a cliffhanger, and for all I know you could be adding another chapter as I write this. Anyway, I'd think it would add to the realism if you at least mentioned the fact the doctor said something to someone. Seto Kaiba probably has friends in high places anyway, so it's not as if there would have to be an investigation or anything. Any a s a small complaint, in an otherwise fabulous story. : )

Thanks for the fast update! I just love this story! So much drama in that last chapter. Is Tris going to be able to cope? I hope you reveal where and why Bakura left to go to. I will be waiting for the next chapter!

OH, the pain, the pain of it all. Poor Seto so confused and unable to control the situation...he he

Where did Bakura go anyway..yeah, like you would tell me

Poor Joey, and you think I was going to torture the poor guy. I was just going to mess his life upa bit, your twisitin his poor mind completely

The Most Holy of Fowls bestores his cluck of approval.

Wow... This story is getting better!! I love it.. but I think poor Seto needs this ::Huggles Seto::

Man, this story's getting better and better. Yes! Psycho Brad's still gone and I'm still doing my dance :-D

Hope Tristan's going to be okay, but I feel so bad for Seto, Yami, and Yugi....although I have an idea they'll end up together.

BTW, when are you going to update that other story of yours?

Well, good luck with your nuptials... Can't wait to read that "wedding gift" that Keysha wrote for you guys :-D