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for Stronger Than Before

by Mellybean

person bakurasgirl
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww....cute Lexi...she needs a squishing.....BADLY. Tris relaly needs that counselor.
Maybe he'll learn to open up a bit. Bakura can show me his canines anyday.....
*grabs naked, snarling Bakura and jams him into schoolbag for work.* Bakura
can help us fill those baskets.
By the way, Yami, do you have any idea what you are
doing to me starting my day with a lemon?
Do you have ANY idea what that does to me?
Do you just love to keep me in this state all day long???????????????
Oh well.....you don't start my day off with a lemon and not pay the
consequences later!!!
hehehehehehehehe..............mmmmm.......Yami Dragon.
Anyway, here's a large basket of Tan pan plushies just for you! *hands basket of tristan plushies...
clothed to your heart's content...or otherwise.

@-------= a rose for you!


person KC
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: u've updated!!!
Yami: *yawns* what time is it?
Me: its about six-thirty, why?
Yami: *eyes wide* in the morning?!
Me: *nods* what's wrong koi? Can't stay awake? *laughs*
Yami: um, yea, I COULD STAY AWAKE!!! *eyes dropping*
Me: could you stay awake until two-thirty until i get home from school?
Yamaybmaybe....
Me: NO SLEEPING BEHIND MY BACK!!!
Yami: *pouts* i'm leaving... *leaves room*
Me: don't worry about her, PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I can't wait to see what Yugi tells Justin about what he saw!!! DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!! CAUSE I'M LIKE SQUIRMING RIGHT NOW TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! CONTINUE OK??? CONTINUE 2 UPDATE ASAP!!! SEE YEA!!! *runs after Yami*
person Tik
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great! Keep going!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oyvey!! Yeah, explain that one!!! Hah, 'Kura does have a softer side!!! Who woulda thunk it? Boy oh boy! Tris, you have some 'splaning to do!!!

Lady Elfskye
waiting for updates soon!

Py huy hubby was reading my sonfic for me on FF and asked me this question. I had to agree with the analogy. Do you? He asked me if Seto was the one who looked like Keanu Reeves in a white trench. I think it fits!!
person KC
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: aw, Justin saw the kiss
Yami: *smirk* guess Justin needed to go to the bathroom, huh?
Me: *gasped* SINCE WHEN DID U WOKE UP?!
Yami: What? I can't wake up anymore?
Me: uh...
Yami: excatly koi... *leaves room*
Me: i am still confused what Yami just did right now. *laughs* Anywayz, CONTINUE AND CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TO JUSTIN'S REACTION TO THIS!!! I'LL SEE YEA NEXT WEEK!!! LATER!!! *runs after Yami*
person bakurasgirl
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! A LEMON! SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! Anyway, Lexi is so cute and i think I want to squish her....in fact,
I think I will......*squishes Lexi* Damn, cs ars are so cute. They just ask to be squished! In any case,
Bakura s tos to kick some serious butt........naked...horny.....and.....wearing a leather collar....
OO....where did that come from? Anyway, great job with this chappie and I can't wait to see if Tristan will beat up Joey's former encounters....
BTW, can Tristan do a naked, horny, fighting scene?????? mmmmm.....naked, horny Tristan......
person gralnak
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Congrats to Lexi and her new home!


:)GRALNAK
person zatken
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ay, the stupid bitch Knowles is planting lots of stupid ideas in Justin's head... And what was that all about (the Keith dream)?

And I don't think I can say this enough, but Lexi is soooo cute ;-D
person Lady Elfskye
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A new chappie. What a chapie too!! Damn Knowles! She knew who Justin was going to, so she poisoned his little mind. Whatta bitch! I hope that Lexi's liking for Ba-Ra rubs off on Justin. Lol! Justin sounds like my son. He asked me if he had to marry someone I picked for him. I told him no, he could marry whomever he wanted. So, he's marrying a family friend's little girl. They have been friends since he was 3. Lexi is too cute!! And, Tris, Possesiveness is good!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Sapphire
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! finaly updated!!! Are you feeling better yet DD? You two write the best fics ever!!!! ok enough ranting now...