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Otogi... Joey... Tristan... *snicker*

Me: *dances around* U UPDATED IT!!!
Yami: *sighed* are you two going to make the sequal that my koi requested???
Me: *hugs Yami* Yami, "dragon" and her partner is trying there best to do it!!!
Yami: *shrugs* but the story is going to be over soon though
Me:now,now, but just wait, ok???
Yami: i hope i can do that, make me will yay koi???
Me: *kisses Yami*
Yami: *kisses back*
Seto: *out of nowhere* excuse me ladies???
Me: *jumps* WHAT ARE U DOING HERE?!
Seto: checking on the both of u, until i walk in during your love making...
Yami: yay, well, u do that all the time with Yugi and himi
mi
Seto: *blushes* go figure
Me: *leaves room*
Yami: hey, did koi leave??? *looks around*
Seto: *looks around* perhaps
Yami: *leaves room*
Seto: *coughs* Anyway, PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY AND PUT ME PLUS MY SWEET HUSBANDS IN IT, OK??? CONTINUE!!! *leaves room quickly*

Aww....poor Joey. Feeling all down because of Keith. *takes Millenium Marasume and kills keith over and over
and over and over*. You gotta admit, he is a great bad guy. And Lexi well......it's amazing she isn't flat as a pancake
with all the squishing she should get. I WANT BAKURA TO SQUISH RYOU! mmmmmmmmm..........Ryou.
Anyway, sorry, i got sidetracked.
Aww...in speaking of loving and squishing......mmm...I have a feeling Joey's gonna get squished my Tris.....LITERALLY!
mmmmmmmmmm..........squished Joey............

Just a note to say, let Bakura kill the bitch. love you Ba ra! ^.^

Lets Kill Rita All Together!
:)GRALNAK

i reviewed this already, whe where's Joey's sister Serenity? *sobs* If Seto's brother Mokuba is in it, where's Joey's sister?! Don't forget about her!!! Damn, where is she??? Continue!!!

Booya!! Gotcha Bitch!! She is so gonna pay!! Poor Yami!! Hehee!!! Justin is soooo cute!! So is Lexi!! And Bakura teaching her how to sneak around is so wonderful!! Too cool!! Tris and Joey in counceling. They need it! And Mokuba is finally gonna get some print!! XD Can't wait for the sequel!!!

Lady Elfskye

Dang, I wish I was Dark Bakura because I want to get my hands on that bitchy Rita Adams. Please please update very very soon...I'm dying to know what happens next...

Wow, it's been a while since I've reviewed...I *love* this story! While I'm not keen on the Honda/Jou coupling, I certainly approve of the YY/Y/S...now that's said...I don't advocate violence of anykind, thougu dou do meet people that certainly tempt you...Bandit Keith is one, Gladys Knowles is another...and Rita Adams, certains ons one...Kill her! Kill her DEAD!!!You hear me? *laughing hysterically* I'm just kidding...but do something about her...permanently. Anyways, I like how you guys wove elements of reality in the story, stating problems and how they are solved...I like the fact that you guys highlighted that having lots of money doesn't necessarily mean happiness, but the people involved try their best to overcome them.I appreciate that, and i hope you guys continue with the good work! BTW, I've printed the whole saga scan can read them whenever I feel the need....Ganbatte kudasai, ne...(do your best!)

Oooh . . . Tik like a lot. Tristan possesive . . . totally new side to him . . . I wonder what he's like when he's actually HAPPY . . .