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for Stronger Than Before

by Mellybean

person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Thanks Dragon but I already have a frying pan. ::holds up frying pan::
Neko Jounouchi: ::hides under deck::
Seto Plushie: Let me thwack him!!
Jams: Now now Seto. Jou Jou was just confused.
Seto Plushie: Confused my ass!! He was HIGH!!
Jams: ::glomps Dragon and Yami Dragon:: I can't wait to see what happens next. ::takes Seto Plushie's frying pan:: No Seto you can't thwack him!!
person watarisgirl
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god guys. That was so....emotional. *keeps a deathgrip on her fryingpan* Ive, oh my god. It was like you looked into my life and wrote a story. I know that is completely lame, but this fic totally moved me. I put off reading it till I had some time and now i regret it. Wow. You got every single train of thought and emotion right. Tell me you will make this a little better thohugh before you end the fic? I need some good stuff in all the tragedy :) but then again, if its tragic too, im cool with it, i guess, but i will cry, and you dont want me to cry, it isnt pretty. Oh please! Write more?!
cheers!
- Watari's girl
person bakuirlÐirl
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grabs frying pan* Joey needs a hug and maybe a tiny little thwack of the frying pan. Ummm...I really need to borrow this for someone more deserving....*hunts for Steven with frying pan*
person EVIL MJ
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keith you nasty little bitch! I am weeping tears of joy at your evilness. Makes a girl proud.
I feel a song coming on.

Joey you are a twit, 'nugh said..not going to waste the frying pan


Dragon...your use of Keith is wonderful....he is my kinda guy....bright spot in my day....
person bluesummers
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who knows where this one is going, and I thought it would settle down.
:)GRALNAK
person EVIL MJ
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED it!! Ha Ha...finally some evil. I was so tired of all that heart wrenching mush that I contimplated hanging myself with my mouse. Lieing, chng, ng, sex, isn't that what the world is really about..anyone who thinks otherwise needs to wake up and live a little bit.

Keith, where would we be without youinioinions of evil salute you, I know you have a lot more nasty nasty up your sleeve. It was worth it to let me lend him to you.
You gotta have evil to have good you know! So you should be thanking Keith for his very existance, and worshiping me (okay I'm laying it on really thick, and can't say that last part with a straight face, but it wor worth a try!! someone might bite)

I think some of my depravity has finally rubbed off on you sister....welcome to the Jungle:)
person Keysha
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT...... YUGI IS PISSED!!! Damn, at least Yami understood. He's so cool. Joey is fucking up badly...smoking that weed. He shouldn't be doing that. It makes nothing better. And Keith is such a manipulator... a hot and sexy manipulator, but one nonetheless. I could kick Tristan and Seto, although sympathy sex is awesome, lol, but pitying. They should not have done that. Please add more to this soon--this story rocketh, and it cheers me up after my hospital visits for the day!
person bakurasgirl
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Joey."closing the door on his past"...so prolific and good!!!! YEAH!!! Continue!!!!!
person lupusdragon
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Partner Switch!
Karen: Seto/Tristan/Yami and Joey/Yugi!
LD: Hehehe fun stuff!
Karen: Good chapter. I can really see Joey and Yugi in this. Yugi finds out Joey's been doing drugs again and tries to help him through leaving Tristan!
LD: Hmm. Maybe we should just let DD and YD write the story.
Karen: Oh fine. Like you are the only one who can make predictions and give ideas for stories.
LD: No, mine are just better. So you are going to update soon, right?
person Angel
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeow. Never thought I'd come across Keith/Jou, and I hate the aforementioned blonde. *growls and grabs Jou* Anyways, this is totally good ^_^ I read the former and it was good to, hope you continue soon.

Dark Elf ~ Yuri Queen