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RD:hey red Dragon here *takes out a mega sized mallet like the ones u see in cartoons and wacks joey on the head angry at his stupidity*nice*wack*story*wack*so far i really liked it*wack*its got a nice plot to it although*wack*im not to happy with how uve been treating Yugi best fix it or *waves mallet threateni at at the aurthoress*U AND I WILL BE HAVING A LITTLE DALK DRAGON DREAMER DRAGON TO DRAGON AND I ASURE U THIS DRAGON WONT BE ON FRIENDLY TERMS*bashes joey with the mallet in her anger*oops uh sry about that joey i only ment to go in wack lvl not bash but u did deserv it u jerk HOW COULD U DO THIS TO TRISTAN AND YOURSELF THAT SHIT U KEEP SHOVING DOWN YOUR SYSTEM IS NOT GOING TO HELP TRUST ME IT HURTS MORE THEN HELPS I WILL BE MOST*bash*DISPLEASED*bash*IF YUGI*bash*WERE TO FINT WHT WHAT U DID*bash bash bash bash bash bash bash* under stand oh and again good story but U BETTER MAKE YUGI ALLL BETTER AGAIN OR THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY this is your warning have i nice day^_____________________^ and i hope we never have this talk again ok *bashes joey one last time until hes so nocked out he wont be able to see straight for a week

... I can't wait to see Tristan and gang beat the shit out of Keith. What a creep! Sadly, a lot of homosexuals I know live in a culture where Keith's behavior is sadly.. not so uncommon.

I'm also glad to know that Tristan is getting more respect than people give him. It seems to me that stories involving Tristan in a homosexual pairing are getting NUMEROUS reviews, and visits. Heck, you got 54 reviews~! Your other story has almost as much (if not, a little more... or less) of these reviews. However, I think it's use use you are a ~very~ talented author, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Another thing I like about your work is you don't have a prominent "dominantory" figure, and/or "submissive" figure in the relationships you depict. You tend to balance out the relationships you depict. I admire that in a yaoi author. Too many yaoi stories contain a couple which consists of "The Man" and "The Woman". First off, I don't believe in gender roles -- for ANY gender, in ANY relationship -- and I could tell by your work that you don't seem to either. Kudos to you! Second off, your story isn't all "aww we're in love! Smoochies! You're the love of my life, and we'll be together forever. Let'olicolic in a field of posies together," nor is it "damn, you're beautiful...let's have STICKY STICKY HOT HOT" -- it depicts a RELATIONSHIP, and quite realistically, I'd like to comment. Not to mention you characterize characters very well, and for the most part, they're not 100% heart-throbs, nre tre they 100% heart-breaking bastards. They're HUMAN.

I do hope the best for these two in the end. Now, I can honestly say I LOVE Tristan and Joey -- usually I read Kaiba x tan,tan, or Honda (Tristan) x Otogi when it comes to YGO -- because of this piece of literary work.

I do hope you turn your talent for writing and charaterization to something more substancial than fanfiction...however.

Jams: ::thwacks Joey with frying pan::
Neko Jounouchi: ::rubs head:: Ow!! What'd ya do THAT for!!??
Jams: ::thwwacks Joey again::
Seto Plushie: :: slowly makes his way to the door::
Jams: And just where do you think YOU'RE going!?!?
Seto Plushie: Slowly insane...? I'm getting my ass out ore..re..... You're pissed.
Jams: No shit Sherlock!!
Neko Jounouchi: ::glomps DD and YD:: Hurry and get the next chappie up before she kills us all!! ::runs from room screaming about the end of the world::

Big Evil Smile for Keith....

Keep your handcuffs to yourself or I will blab your secrets to the highest bidder...yes people I can be bought off to tell all of DD and YD's bad, nasty, horrible secrets.

Oh my Keith is doing so much more than I could have envisioned.....Evil is so nummy

it's like..like...FRIENDSHIP...

BWaaahhhhaa..sorry, I just had to do that ....tee hee

*hands Bakura frying pan* Use that on steven next..

Poor Joey...he wants to go home....BAD KEITH! *hits kieth with frying pan*

Hey, who, exactly, is gonna be busy next week????? *wink* As if I didn't know....

mmmm........turkey.....

Karen: *smacks Joey with the APL (All-Powerful Laptop)*
LD: *gives Joey a swift kick in the ass*
Karen: And that is how we feel about that.
LD: *hits Tristan upside the head*
Karen: *gives Tristan a comforting pat on the back*
LD: That is how we feel about that.
Karen: *shoves the needle through Keith's eye*
LD: *bludgons Keith with the APL*
Karen: That is how we feel about that.
LD & Karen: ^______________^
LD: That is how we feel about Uke Seto!

DAMN YOU! DAAAAAAAAAAAAMN YOU... this is probably the best YGO fanfic I've read. DAMN YOU..

Tristan and Joey MUST be together; they COMPLETE each other...

I don't understand tho... the whole Seto x Tristan thing.... That "friendship/love" thing... to me, it's just a need for sex.

Hmm...la... whatever.

CONTINUE

:::takes frying pan::: THANK YOU :::thwacks jou with frying pan::: YOU IDIOT!!

UPDATE! UPDATE ALL YOUR FICS!

I love chpt7...but I've suggestion...I was think about "Un-break My Heart" (Toni Braxton)...
I was listen to the lyrics and this song is about Tristan and Joey...especially from the previous chapter that u
wrote...

DragondreamerYamiDragon, I love this pairing Tristan/Jou...
In the few chapters, u made me cry...
Bandiith,ith, I knew it that he's up 2 no good...
I hope Tristan save his beloved Jou...be4 somethiorstorst happens 2 him...

Keep writing...