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for Stronger Than Before

by Mellybean

person xxkurenaixx
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww man...this is hells good...i ca never picture jounouchi like that....o.O....damn that banit keith....grrr....plwase dont say that honda is going for kaiba? ....noooo....but hopefully he'll geck wck with jounouchi...pleaseT_T i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter...
person RyuArashi
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God!! When aare you going to make Jounouchi come back to his senses?! Stop dragging the torture like this!!! Keith should be shot, drawn *and* quartered...then Tristan, Bakura and Seto should beat the living daylights out of him....Great story, though...I love Yami, Yugi and Seto to death, so I'm *very* happy they're together...But please let them find Jou soon...I can't stand seeing him self-destruct like this.....Pretty please????
person DG
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I come by all the time to see if these awesome stories are added onto. Hey, I have a question: how come you never write any Bakura/Ryou lemons? You have them paired in many of your fics, but never any lemons between them. That's what I'd like to see!
person EVil MJ
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so proud of Keith...I just love it when he gets all nasty and dominant, Makes me warm and tingly inside
BTY. Nice touch giving Joey the whole battered person syndrom along with the drug addition, it makes it so much more believable

I think you have finally tapped Keith's up to this point unused potential as a character. *happy sigh*

Good luck with the crazy American and the big goldfish...your gonna need it. For a congradulations present I am going to get you some coffee, cause you are gonna be pretty tired dealing with two spouses......(you'd think my mother would have taught you something over the years)
person Fae of Heaven - The Customized Landscape
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! NEW CHAPPIE! *Snuggle*

Well, I must say, I definatley think the whole situation with Keith makes Joey's character much more interesting. Not only that, but it gives the reader a "force" that compells them to keep reading. Damn you. Did you also know you're helping people's SAT scores by creating such dramatic, back-and-forth, twisting storylines? You're doing your readers a favor! ^^; You should be proud.

Moonlight? Oooh! How romantic. <3 I hope you three have a great time.
person Jams
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Poor poor Tristan. And Joey no baka!!! ::clocks Joey on the back of the head::
Neko Jounouchi: I didn't do it!!! ::hides under desk::
Seto Plushie: Damn Baka Inu! You should take lessons from these two Jams.
Jams: Yeah they write some of the best lemons.... Descriptive but not too graphic. Just the way I like 'em! ^^
Seto Plushie: Although they can drop Keith anytime theyre ready.
Jams: ::shudders:: My uncle's name is Keith.... ::blanch::
person Keysha
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for making this chappie just for me!!! *blows a kiss*

Full moon weddings are said to stimulate the sex drive. I know, because I got married on the night of a full moon. LOL.

Once again, best of luck, and much love to you both! I love you guys!!
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... too much angst... PLEASE let those two together again... it's killing him~!
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oo.....GAH! KEITH DESERVES A SWIFT KICK! *hugs drug dependent Joey* I'll protect you, Joey.

Ryou:......You don't love me anymore??? *chibi eyes*kurakurasgirl: OF COURSE I LOVE YOU MY BISOUENEN!!!!! COME HERE, YOU! *hugs naked Ryou*
Bakura: how come you always hug us naked???? You know, you can't hug us naked when you marry!
Bakurasgirl: Sure I can. Hmmm....maybe Dragondreamer wants a naked Seto. Would that make you feel better?
Bakura:........You're TRYING to get sent to the Shadow Realm, aren't you?
Bakurasgirl: THAN I WON'T HAVE TO DO THIS *insert many naughty words* HOMEWORK! RA DAMNED HOMEWORK!
Ryou: Nevermind her, she's been up since 4:15am reading Modst Pst Poetry.
Love ya.
person lupudragon
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: *huggles YD & DD* You are too nice!
LD: I though you said they were evil.
Karen: Well, that too, but only in the sense that this story is torture.
LD: Exquisite torture. *grinning maliciously*
Karen: *gasps in horror* You used a fifty cent word! And yes, I agree, as painful as this fic is, it is so much fun to read ^_^
LD: Painful?
Karen: Well, all of the suspense and angst.
LD: I like the angst, it makes the story more than just some sappy lovey dovey thing, like every other fic out there.
Karen: True, you fellow Dragons are nothing if not origninal. That is why we love you!
LD: That, and you are really good about updating ^_^