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for Stronger Than Before

by Mellybean

person Fae of He - T - The Customized Landscape
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the long time before I reviewed. ^_^; Tristan, how could you do that?! X_x .... is there a reason for the names of Joey's customers? ;D hehehe. (inside joke) Anyway, I can't wait to see a Seto/Bakura/Tristan confrontation on Keith. XD Boy can't I wait to see his fucken scum-bag white-trash ass get beaten.
person KC
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you've updated! I'm so glad, but i feel sorry for tristan seeing Joey like that. Aw, make the next chapter by next week! Please? Anywayz, CONTINUE!!!
person Zatken
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god, Tristan.... And yes, if I'm picking a character, I'd be Bakura when he gives Tristan the glass. He says what I would say to someone who's refusing to do what's good for him...

But yeah, I couldn't blame the poor guy for doing that. He ends up seeing Joey giving head to someone else like that.... especially for money... It just breaks my heart.

Ay...you gotta update soon, guys. And by the way, thanks for emailing me about the update! Hope you keep me in mind when you update your stories, because I love them a lot :-D

ps: Congratulations, you two!
person EVIL MJ
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What is it with you and the angst woman?

Stop stabbing Keith...It's my job to punish him...*evil thoughts*
Well, I can't wait to see how you straighten this mess out
person Mary
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! I find the dynamics of abusive relationships fascinating. (Yes, I know I'm strange.) Please write more with Joey and Keith! I'm obsessing over this fic. I can't wait to read more!
person lupusdragon
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: How does hitting Joey help with the battered wife syndrome?
LD: Oh, stop being so damn anylitical.
Karen: That rat bastard did even acknowledge that Joey said "I love you"
LD: *castrates Keith with wiresnips* Hee hee!
Karen: *grimace* That is just gross.
LD: Hmm, what can I do to Tristan... selfish prick.
Karen: He needs a little sense knocked into him... don't even think about it LD!
LD: *pouting* I was not going to do anything too violent.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Tris, Stupid Joey, Stupid Keith!!!! Gods above! *grabs frying pan and cracks them all in the head* *hugs Seto and 'Kura* Damn, damn, damn! More please!!!!

Looking forward to One Way Street too!!
person bakurasgirl
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tristan: What is it with your wife? WHY DOES SHE HATE ME?
Bakuasgirl: She doesn't you you...she loves you.
Tristan:......Yeah right! SHE ALMOST KILLED ME!
Ryou: Bakurasgirl loves me and look at all the crap I'm going through.
Bakurasgirl: Because I love you, Ryou!
Ryou: *jumps on Bakurasgirl's lap* see?
Bakuasgirl: *hugs Ryou and naked, snarling Bakura*

Great chappie, babe! *hands wife Tristan and Joey plushies....TOF TOF THEM* You made Ryou cry.....*hugs Ryou again*
person Ykarzel
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...... it's a good thing i love you or i would hate you.
person RavenWings
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*takes out all ALL MIGHTY FRYING PAN* This is the ALL MIGHTY FRYING PAN! because this has NEVER been used! O.O I'm scared just to hold it let alone _use_ it! *takes baseball position* Here Keithy Keithy Keithy... *smirks as Keith walks over* *swings the ALL MIGHTY FRYING PAN*
Keith: X.x
*smirks* Here Trist! Come here! ^ ^
Trist: *walks over and sees dead Keith.* O.o
*walks over to him* *hugs him reasurenly* *backs off then wags finger at him* BAD TRISTAN MATTHEW TAYLOR! *smaks him across the face*
Trist: *pout* *sniffle* *walks off rubbing cheek* *once out of sight he's back to normal self* *rolls eyes*
Jou Jou! ^ ^ Come here boy! FOOD!
Jou: *zips in front of me* ^ ^
*punchs him hard on the arm*
Jou: OCH! WHAAA! *runs off and also goes back to normal self once out of sight* *mumbles about not getting any food*
SETO! GET YOUR AsS OVER HERE!
Seto: Only because you asked nicily...
^ ^ Yup! *opens arms* Come here!
Seto: O.o *runs*
*runs after him and tackles him* Thank the gods for the track team! ^ ^ *hugs him* It's okay Seto! All will be right soon!

*snicker* I had alot of time! ^ ^ UPDATE! You're doing great huns!

Ja huns!

Loves from Saa Ra AKA Doll Face.