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for Stronger Than Before

by Mellybean

person xxkurenaixx
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK THATS IT!!!!!! I WANNA KICK JOUNOUCHIS ASS TIL IT HURTS!!!!!!....either way is ok with me.^^"^^"hehehe...GAH!!!! MAN!!!! jou makes me SOOOOOO mad that i wanna beat him myself....
DAMNIT JOU!!!! SHIT!!!!^^"""""hehehehee.....i mean like HELLO!!!!! Honda is trying to help you
and you wont let him.....GAH!!!!! >=[...dahat hat Jou....hopefully Honda will find out but wont do
much about it...T____T....GOD!!!!T___T....
person KC
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: u did it again!!!
Yami: what is it aibou koi?
Me: *pouts* she made another cliffe
Yami: *raised eyebrows* is that how u even spell the word aibou koi?
Me: *shrugs* doesn't matter!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *leaves room angrily*
Yami: what? is that all she gonna write? Anywayz, the chapter off Joey/Tristan was good, but when r u going to get them married!? Another sequal, huh? ANYWAYZ, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *followz me*
person bakurasgirl
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmm...................lemon.......aww....poor Tristan...*kills Keith again* Joey!! grrr......
person lupusdragon
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: I REALLY do NOT like where this is going!
LD: Oh, come on, it is fun!
Karen: No, it really isn't. It is sad and they are all being stupid and who the hell would grab Ryou?! And why did the guards hold Bakura back?! GRRRRR.
LD: Hmmm, I think someone needs to eat something.
Karen: *pout* I am not cranky.
LD: Oh yes you are, this was a great chapter and all you can do is complain. This is so fucking great! Can't wait to see what is going to happen.
person Joey Fanatic
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I echo Joey...Oh for the love of.... What the hell???? WTF is Tris up to?? And Joey? This is not cool. So not cool. Otogi is though. He knows what Joey's going thru. Maybe if Tris can stop Joey, and Seto can stop Tris... Damn you guys!! I hate cliffies!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person zatken
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Joey, you nut... Why? Ay.... Someone - anyone - please stop Joey....

Ay...another cliffie! Update soon, please. The suspense is killing me...
person lupusdragon
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: heehee! Call Bakura when something needs to be "taken care of"ren:ren: ie... when someone needs to be in lots of pain.
LD: This is good stuff. Joey is an idiot, but he can't help himself. He is just a mutt after all.
Karen: That is not very nice. He can't just get better over night.
LD: Well, why the hell not?
Karen: -_-;
person Lady Elfskye
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..Bakura on a caffeine high?? Sounds fun!!!! Ah, why didja have to make Ryou cry?? An me too!! Thanks for the tissue warning!! Lovely chappieusuausual!! Love Bakura, Seto, Tris and Panik scene too!! @_@ Priceless!!!!


Lady Elfskye
person zatken
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....good chapter. I didn't get an email this time, but I've been reading this story from time to time because I like it a lot. Keep up the good work, guys :-D