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by Mellybean

person moonflower
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it it was cute and hot to seto was so cool da way he treated jous dad well anyways loved it write more and yah thouh i perfer jou/seto this id good two but it be hot if seto and everyone hada 8'em anyways write more see yah
clomps chu
moonflower
person Oni No Yami
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! It was the cutest story I've ever read!! I knew that Yami and Yuugi liked Seto from the begining, though. ^ ^;
Ryou: Did you, really?
Bakura: She ain't lyin'!
Bakura!! Ain't ain't a word!
Bakura: *Blinks* But you just-
SILENCE!!!!!
Bakura: *Blinks* Fine, be bitchy.
Ahem... Anyways, I really loved this story though it was much too short for my taste. And no offence but there wasn't much detail. Not a bad thing because too much detail makes things very boring just giving you guys a suggestion.
Ryou: Je ne. And I'm sure that at least I could figure my way through a maze though I can't say the same for Bakura.
Bakura: Nu-uh! I've been watching the Labyrinth.
Ryou: What does that have to do with-
Bakura: I just have to look for the little worm thing and walk through the wall! =D
Ryou: - -;
Riiiiiiiiight... Well, later!
person Bianca
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I started reading Family By Choice and was lost cause it didn't say it was a sequel and got to chapter six before i realized this existed. I really like what I've read of Family by Choice and I really enjoyed this story too, it was so good. It's angsty and cute and everything, I can't wait to read you're other stories!
person C0nfus3d
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was hilarious and the most adorablest thing i have EVER read in my whole life. It was so very well in character and absolutely well though out a-and lol tristan could still feel bakura's meatloaf moving lmao. i'm never gonna get over that. lol can't wait to read the sequel!
person Jams
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: This just gets better and better each time I read it.
Seto Plushie: And how many times ARE you going to read it?
Jams: As many times as I damn well please! :P
Neko Jounouchi: You tell him Jams!! XD
person Honda
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww! *sniff* I loved it so much... I don't know what to say. *hugs Tristan and Joey* Those two are made for each other...
person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: SQUEE!! I loved it! ::glomps author and yami author:: ^_____^ I love this pairing too... I wanna see more Tristan/Joey stories.
Neko Jounouchi: I don't.... ::shudders::
Jams: Jou Jou... ::warning glare::
Neko Jounouchi: ::sweatdrop:: ^_^U Not that it wasn't well written or anything! ::huggles author and yami author:: It's just... Me? And Tristan? ::shudders again::
Jams: But you guys would make a cute couple! ^____^
Seto Plushie: O.o What the...?? They made me all weird!!
Chibi Yugi Plushie: That's cause you ARE weird Seto-kun!
Seto Plushie: -_- I'm so abused....
Neko Jounouchi: Yeah in this story you were! ::falls:: XD ::high fives Tristan::
Jams: ::rolls eyes:: Anywho... keep up the good work!
person bakurasgirl
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*evil cackle* welcome to AFF.net......!!!
Everybody, read Dragondreamer!!!
*Seto hands Bakurasgirl a ton o' cash*
Ha ha ha!!! I"M RICH!!! *hugs seto and runs into supply closet to get...binder clips, yeah. that's it...binder clips.*

Great story!!!!