rate_review Reviews

Yeah!! Two yums up! Or actually...more like four....add two for the pairing ^_- Nicely written...nice characerization...though...characterization can go out the backdoor ifn it's a good lemon! Which this is ^_^ Continue...or write more for this pairing...or something!

I loved it so very much! You have got to continue soon Onegia!!!!

Nice one shot. I like the way Bakura was the one who was on top, seems like something Malik would make him do. Anyway, you should try these more often, you're obviously very talented at them. Hope to see more of your stuff.

~Jane

P.S. - Malik is a scary mo-fo when he's possessive.

Karen: * drools *
LD: * drools *
Random voice: As both sides are currently speechless, the part of the reviewer tonight will be played by Zia, an OC who was, until this point, stuck in limbo.
Zia: Hi! Um, Karen and Lupusdragon are at a loss for words due to the extemely erotic situation their favorite hikaris found themselves in. The would like me to say that they love the story and they think that you should write more with this pair. Oh, and LD requests that you make Malik the dominant one if you do decide to do one again... Karen says pretty please...

I like this one. Poor Malik, his sister shouldn't be hiding something like that. Does he still have the rod? Bakura had the ring, but it didn't seem like Malik had the rod. Did Yugi get it then? Anyway, that was reaaly cool. Those two are so hot together. ^_^

The second part totally surprised me. Wow. I didn't see it a all. Is Malik gonna be okay? You have to write more, or else! Or else I dunno what, but or else anyway!