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Karen: Oh, Ryou is in so much trouble.
LD: I cannot believe that he is betrying Malik like that. How dare he!
Karen: Hell if I know. I just hope that things don't get too bad. I like Malik with Ryou, even if it is totally angst ridden.
LD: yeah, well I like Malik, so he had better not get hurt * stamps foot petulantly *

nicly written, little Ryou clinging to the ring...aww...i think...so wahts going to happen eh? Keep writing please?

Wow. This is a really good story. Please continue soon, because it's really interesting. Did I mention I love all of your stories?

Another amazing chapter it seems. I thought you had decided to make this a one-shot, but apparently I was mistaken, not that I mind, mind you. *smile* Anyway, Bakura doesn't know what happened between Yami Bakura and Malik (nice plot-twist BTW). Bakura doesn't want to get rid of the Ring, I actually think that's pretty cool. Is there something going on between Bakura and Yami Bakura that I'm mis? P? Perhaps. Maybe some connection lYugiYugi has with Yami Yugi.

Either way, Malik wanted to dominate this time, and I'm guessing it's not because so many people requested it in the reviews. He seemed scared and what better way to prove that he can handle it by being the dominant one this time around, right? If I'm wrong just yell at me.

Great story.

~Artemis Z.

P.S. - Bakura was uber-sweet, in that whole I'm a lying little brat kind of way. He has gotten good at it. *smiles*

Karen: Ok, what the hell just happened? What is with all the sneaking around?
LD: Ryou is trying to make Malik forget about the Ring. He has to be creative about it. That is something he is good at.
Karen: * pouts * I just don't like him being all dishonest is all.
LD: Yeah, but he got some mad lovin' ^____^
Karen: ^_____^ I guess that makes it a little better then.

Nice twist. Totally unexpected due to the content of the first chapter. ondeonder what Ryou is going to think now...and how Malik's gonna act towards him. ondeonderfully written...and nicely written rape fics are -really- hard to find... And it's actually not the initial intent of the the story either....it just sorta evolved into rape.

I hope the next chapter either clears things up, or leads to more to keep the story going.

Have I told you how incredibly cool you are lately? I read the warning and was like 'well, how the hell is goingoing to manage that and then his voice, and then I cackled, and from then on it was entirely too amusing. Perhaps I'm just twisted, or perhaps you write angst in such a way that I find it hous.ous.

Either way, I have never laughed so hard, in the first few paragraphs of a story in my life. The rest was angsty to the extreme, and I sobered up accordingly, but the few opening paragraphs...

Great fic.

~Artemis Z.

P.S. - Bakura was really IC, to the extreme. Amazing job with that.

Please post again soon! This is really good!

Wow. That was utterly depressing, in a very good way. My favorite couple, in all their exceedingly NOT happy glory. I'm glad to see that a second part has been added, and I actually like what you did with Bakura. A huge nt ont of people try to pull of the Bakura-rape thing, very few people are successful in that attempt. In my oppinion, you handled it very well. Nice job, I enjoyed the fic.

do a sqelue and make it were they are a little older. I'm a sucker for those types of romances