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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was mostmost well-written rambling of smut I've ever read! And I've read a lot more smut than I should have. It was touching, if rather bittersweet. It was beautiful. I'm so glad you tied up the plot that way. Aw! I could gush for hours!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I've been obsessed with this fanfic for much, much too long. I mean...it's probably my favorite Malik/Bakura fic ever. It's definitely my most-read favorite fanfic of all time. It's quite possibly the reason I nearly failed my journalism class. Sure, all the good students were doing their articles; Pachelbel was reading smut! ...And what's truly sad about that is, I think I'd probably *still* choose 'Teenage Jail' over boosting my grade. Poor student, or freakily dedicated reader? I try to be a little of both ;p
I have to say, I never thought about socks in sex scenes before. I mean, I guess I did to the point where I thought fanarts were more cute than "steamy" if the socks were left on, but...
Your characterizations are just...spot-on, but it's such a rarity in any fandom to have a character so neatly *in-character* that I'm always incredibly disappointed when I see you haven't added to the Bakura/Malik-ness of this fandom.
Agh, it's 4 in the morning, I really shouldn't be reviewing, but I've read and re-read this fic so many times over the past year I figured I'd better get around to the feedback at some point. If I waited any longer the rambling would run into raving and you'd have a 4-page review to wade through, and nice as that may seem, A) my hands would fall off before I finished, and B) Do you really want to take an hour to read a review?
So, I'll cut it off with just letting you know this story is amazing and I love it and *cough*I'dloveitifyouwrotemoreBakura/Maliksmut*cough*.
I have to say, I never thought about socks in sex scenes before. I mean, I guess I did to the point where I thought fanarts were more cute than "steamy" if the socks were left on, but...
Your characterizations are just...spot-on, but it's such a rarity in any fandom to have a character so neatly *in-character* that I'm always incredibly disappointed when I see you haven't added to the Bakura/Malik-ness of this fandom.
Agh, it's 4 in the morning, I really shouldn't be reviewing, but I've read and re-read this fic so many times over the past year I figured I'd better get around to the feedback at some point. If I waited any longer the rambling would run into raving and you'd have a 4-page review to wade through, and nice as that may seem, A) my hands would fall off before I finished, and B) Do you really want to take an hour to read a review?
So, I'll cut it off with just letting you know this story is amazing and I love it and *cough*I'dloveitifyouwrotemoreBakura/Maliksmut*cough*.
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the last sentence it was cute. This fic was awsome!! I've just recently started reading your works and I love them!!! Your're such an amazing author!!! Teenage Jail was a wonderful fic and I really really enjoyed reading it!
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have achieved the rare effect of forcing me to have a deep emotional response to a piece of fanfiction. *Very* nice job, you handled the mental instabilities of both boys very well.
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. *grins* You’re one of the people I know who can actually write a good Yami Bakura. Keep it up! I maintain that the only reason this fic came about, was because you penned up all of your YGO sexual tensions, and thus this is the consequence. Not that I minded for a second. *winks*
I especially liked the scene where Rishid walks in on th I j I just liked the whole blink part. I actually pictured it. *snicker*
Anyway, great job. And an ambiguous ending is just as likely to be a happily-never-after ending as a happily-ever-after ending. And if you ever question it…eh…just write a chapter for yourself where Ryou can’t deal with it and commits suicide. Ooh, maybe even have Isis find him. *steeples fingers* Ah, the evilness…
Anyway! Awesome fic!
~Artemis Z.
I especially liked the scene where Rishid walks in on th I j I just liked the whole blink part. I actually pictured it. *snicker*
Anyway, great job. And an ambiguous ending is just as likely to be a happily-never-after ending as a happily-ever-after ending. And if you ever question it…eh…just write a chapter for yourself where Ryou can’t deal with it and commits suicide. Ooh, maybe even have Isis find him. *steeples fingers* Ah, the evilness…
Anyway! Awesome fic!
~Artemis Z.
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I liked it lots!
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE ONE MORE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR..OR AT LEST MAKE A SEQUL (I know i didn't spell that right but you know what i mean) PLEASE!!!!!!!! Youe ofe of my favorit authors and one of the best in my opinon (i know i propablely didn't spell that right ether but you Know) PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great story please make a sequl at lest.
(making Puppy eyes while saying this) Please Please please please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I absolutely love this story.
(making Puppy eyes while saying this) Please Please please please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I absolutely love this story.
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May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whoa... this story keeps getting better every time I read it. It's perpetually disturbing but at the same time really human, I feel bad for both Malik and Bakura having to go through that and really a happy ending at this point seems impossiable but ever still it's a truly amazing piece of work especially if you like phycology. I'm beyond impressed, this fic turned into much more then just casual yaoi and pointless lemon scenes. Wonderful job ^_^
-Lady Yami Bakura (fanfic.net author)
-Lady Yami Bakura (fanfic.net author)
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May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Well that was interesting
Karen: But not bad at all. I mean, of course Ryou and Malik would have issues... look at what they went through with their yamis.
LD: Yeah, so considering that, and the nature of the story as a whole, it was a really good ending.
Karen: Yeah, for once I think the stereotypical happy ending would have been totally out of place.
LD: Plus it would have ruined the wonderful angstiness!
Karen: You should write more stories. This one is really good!
Karen: But not bad at all. I mean, of course Ryou and Malik would have issues... look at what they went through with their yamis.
LD: Yeah, so considering that, and the nature of the story as a whole, it was a really good ending.
Karen: Yeah, for once I think the stereotypical happy ending would have been totally out of place.
LD: Plus it would have ruined the wonderful angstiness!
Karen: You should write more stories. This one is really good!
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so horrendously hooked on this(just read part 5). So it was supposed to be a one shot, if it was I wouldn't have more to come back to, would I? So Malik knows he copied the heiroglyphs... Now what's he gonna do? You better update and tell us all soon!
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