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by Lupusdragon1

schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, great story!
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMR! This is so good and such a great one-shot. This is what Tendershiping is all about.
Hidden love, some one brave, 'the confrontation', unsure feelings, acceptance, and joy.
*sagenod*
person Trapt Angel
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...
OK, couldn't help it. It is just so aww-worthy.
=-)
Love it.
If I went to my thesaurus to get more words for how amazing this story is, my yami would smack me over the head with it.
And that HURTS.
So I'll just point at the stuff written above and double it. Okay?

person Trapt Angel
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You can review twice!
*blush* Oops...did I say that out loud?
I wish I could write like this...*cannot write sex scenes to save her life*

This IS a lemon. And a damn good one at that. Keep it up.

Trapt Angel

PS. My yami said to tell Bakura he's an insult to darkness. She said he'd know what she meant.
...
Don't shoot the messenger. I THINK she meant it as a compliment, but I can't be sure.
person QueenV
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved this! ^_^ I'm the biggest Ryou/Bakura fan and I love reading yaoi about our favorite albino bishies! ^_^;; And your story was just so incredible. So cute and yet so sexy at the same time! ^_^ I wish I had the guts to write this kind of wonderful material! *is nervous about writing sex scenes* *blushes*
Aanyways, great job! I look forward to reading more of your fiction. Ryou/Ba for forever! ^_____^
person Onyx
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that story can be improved upon - it was beautiful!
person Columbia
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, I've always loved the romance ones, aside from angst of course. And, as for you hunting me down, tying me to my computer chair and forcing me to update my story...Neb beat ya to it. *glares at best friend who laughs in the distance, eating and tauntColuColumbia with the devestatingly delicious Sour Cream and Chedder chips that happen to be hers anyway* Damn idiot.

Write more and maybe I'll update faster!
person astracindel
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU FLY PLY POSTED!!!!! Oh, and that "not lemon" LEMON was great. All I can say is WOW...you did a great job. I can't wait for you to post more. :) Keep up the good work..More Please!! :) I loved this! **drool** ryou/bakura...LOL
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a great fic. I really enjoyed this a lot and hope to read more from you .
person bakurasgirl
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know you published here,too! WoW! Let me just say that you have out done me. You wrote the best, most romantic lemon that....words can't even desribe how hot this thing is. It's soooooooo cute!