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...Getting up off the floor... Could this get any hotter!

damn i need a ice shower!! shit... well ryou is gonna end up wiht one helluva headache in the morning, hee that was jsut great!! wow... ooh my i think i'm gettin hte vapors!! *sits in front of fan* damn that was jsut--great!!

OMG, what an orgy! @___@ You did an awesome job on this chapter! Very hot! ^.^

Jams: And once again Her Supreme Hentainess reigns supreme!! XD Awsome phile babe! Although I was looking forward to the Seto/Amelda one... Oh well... Take your time and make it just as sweet as the rest of them! XD
Neko Jounouchi: Am I gonna be able to watch those two? I WANNA WATCH!!
Seto Plushie: Pervert...
Neko Jounouchi: ::licks his lips:: You know it Dragon!

RD: heheh beautiful as ever Keysha simply superb hehe dam that had to be the hottest orgy ive ever read hehe now i have a request that i hope you will take into account ive always wanted to see a Mind control ficcy ya know but in this case though yugi will be mind controlled it wil be done willingly and basically him along with ryou and maybe jou are basically slaves for a day were they have to do any and all sexual favors there masters want them to and i want yugi and ryou and jou to gain some stamina as youve showned in this chappy ryou passed out after this so i want him and yugi and jou to go all day without so much as them losing an inch of there arousal and the max of times i want to see them release is up to you but make it so that it builds there stamina and id kinda like it if u tried some different means to do so like for one part of it yugi and yami could be doctor and patient were yami is trying to see what makes yugi "tick"if u will and through the entire thing yugi ryou and jou will be like pets but precious almost if not totally treated like humans pets and if u could have Serenity of Godsmack playing either that or Enigmas song I love Ill Kill you its up to you oh and another one id like you to do could be with anyone from MG have some water fun with Dream Of The Dolphin Playing well gtg now keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

HOLY SHIT KEYSHA!! You dirty minded person! lol that was awesome!! Got to love group sex with all those lovely men. I half expected Pegasus to show up in his pink funny bunny panties or a playboy bunny outfit!! *snickers*
Dragon

Daaaaaaaamn.. That was one of the hottest things I've read in a while.

And I have to applaude Yugi for being able to keep filming while still getting banged from behind!

YuukiSan: Oh...my...god! This has got to be the hottest story that I've ever read! I love it! I've just been introducted to Yu-Gi-oh (and this fic) by my Beta DragonBlade but this fic has made my fall in love with the anime. I love the cutness between Yami/Yugi and Joey/Seto. I love the puppy thing, it's just so damn cute. You have a good balance of sappy cuteness and steamy lemons. There really is something for everyone.

This fic has been a bunch of firsts for me. I've never read threesomes (let alone foursomes) until your fic. Never read Yuri, until your fic. Never read BDSM, until your fic. You've desensitized me and I really need to thank you for it.

NinjaMouse: Let me be blunt, your ex-husband is an asshole. Where the fuck does he think he can get off saying your writing pushed you away when he was so involved with this story!? And to think that he had a lot of 'fun' because of this fic. You can do so much better then him. Find someone else that can acutally accept and support your talent rather then get jealous of a bunch of fictional characters. I'm so glad that you didn't let the bastard get you down. Here I say "wOOt go you!"

Listen to Kelly Clarkson's "Since you've been gone". That song was so written for you.

YuukiSan: I have a question that has absolutly nothing to do with your story. I was wondering who you fave Beyblader is? I have recently been introduced to that wonderful show (I love my Beta!) with the oh-so drool worthy Rei and Kai *drools all over keyboard*. I was just wondering.

Well that's it from us for now. Can't wait for the next update!

~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse

P.S You are my Hentai-Goddess!

i like your story so far. very fun! just wanted to let you know, the thing you called a "slave ball" is actually called a ball gag. no, i'm not saying how i know that. i'm pretty new to this fandom but i totally get where you're coming from about mokuba/seto. love is love and all, but crazy shota yaoicest crosses a bit of a line. any way, your story is happyfun!

I have Beyond the Invisible permantly on my comp so I played it while reading this really yummy part. Gods, that was good thank you!