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Hey! I caught the first chapter of this on the yugioh slash group and I had to come over and read the others. Wow, I really like the idea of this fic. It's very original, and the people getting paired together are terribly interesting. Honestly I didn't even know I liked this kind of fic until now. Great job!
-Kayla

You know I was just thinking that Pegasus and Keith would be perfect together. I mean you could make Pegasus one of the pleasurers. You could name him Ruby because of his eye color (it looks kind of crimson and ruby like). Just a suggestion. an'an't wait until the next phile.

Please....Please.....Onegai dakara!!!! (Can you tell how much I love this?!) Continue these stories! They had me all hot and bothered...!*swipes sweat from forehead*. I know Yugi and Yami have been done so much, but that's because they go so well together! They're my absolute favorite couple, followed by Seto and Jou, and then a threesome of Yami, Yugi and Seto....Please let Yami keep Yugi....he's just so cute and too adorable to belong to anyone else apart from Yami and Seto....pretty please....*uses cute puppy eyes* Apart from that, you're a great writer; the pair ups don't seem so bad with you writing them....Keep up the good work! ^_____^ I look forward to some more mind blowing, lustful sex!

Well, I was going to suggest a Bakura/Ryou and a Bakura/Malik....but it seems you already plan on that. Yay! Luv the fic. Can't wait for more.

*drooooooooooool* *bows to her supreme Hentai-ness* Makkykin's fantasy is my favourite here so far! But I'm reallllllly looking forward to Ryou and Bakura. *sigh* Love the white-haired bishies.... *drooooool*

*blushes* Im sorry, I didn't mean for my review to come out like I was offended...cuz I wasn't, but thanks for considering my request! And believe me, after the life I've lived nothing offends me anymore...unless it's some dead-beat thug wanna be acting homophobic, but that's differant. I still love your story to death and Im giving you a chibi-Seto plushie wearing his hot ass blue leather jumpsuit cuz I love yah as well! *hugs and runs off*

Eiji: Yah, the thing with the plushie was a thank you and an apology for sounding like head strong teenie bopper, just so yah know. Keep up with the good work and as for Bandit Kieth I would suggest Seto, just cuz I see so many stories were its Seto/Jou and Keith comes in trying to break 'em up by raping or kidnapping poottlettle Jou. Actually, that would make a pretty hot threesome if say in case Jou comes back for another fantasy and ends up with the bandit and the dragon. *grins evilly then drools* wow, I have a twisted mind. *wanders off to find Columbia*

LOL, more booty than a toilet seat, eh? That's an interesting way to put things!
Too bad Peggy isn't a fantasy giver. Bandit Keith and him would be preeeetty interesting! **wiggles her eyebrows suggestively**
My husband, Seth caught me laughing so hard that he thought I had lost it, and he called the police for his safety, but when they came over, I pointed to the computer screen, and one of the coppers looked at the screen and began laughing. He then told me he read this once and he had the exact same reaction I did. I finally got Seth to read it and he was laughing as hard as I was and we live in a pretty small neighborhood, so we ended up waking up the entire block with our laughing. It was great though, my husband and I never get to spend any time together anymore, so thank you very much. I have too many Yugioh hentai doujinshi, many of them featuring the Black Magician Girl. Seth read one and he said she reminded him of an ex-girlfriend of his. He told me her nickname in high school was "Lemonhead" because she had so much blonde hair. I think he told me her real name was Sunny. When he told me her name, I don't know, it just sounded like the Black Magician Girl to me. =P Well, anyways, I'm glad you're adding sexy Bakura and Otogi to the wonderful array of fantasy fulfillers. **smiles happily** Oh, and in my opinion, you should definitely make the Celtic Guardian one of the pleasure givers, I mean c'mon how could you not! Just look at that body, and those piercing eyes and gorgeous blonde hair! *__*
And you want to know another weird thing? My husband looks a lot like Seto Kaiba! Sexy, but strange, yes. Oh well!
Keep everything coming! Ohhh! And one more thing!!! ^___^
You've so got to make Espa Roba one of the fantasy givers!! Or atleast write a chapter with him!!! He's ADORABLE, for god's sake! ^____^
Maybe make him use some of that "psychic power" against Joey??! **sighs** BE STILL MY PERVERTED HEART!!! ^_____^

Heehee, yeah, that's all. Keep on writing, you are doing an incredible job! ^________^

Chel

I've been reading all of these, and I must say, these are some of the best lemons I've ever read! ('Specially the Yami/Jou one) ^.^ I do have an itsy request though... Could you please try to do a Bakura/Otogi chapter sometime? They're my fave couple on YGO, but no one ever does it... Anything with Esper Roba would be cool too. ^.~ And as for who to put Keith with- *hides behind a rock* -I suggehosthost! (Bonz in the dub) I know, I know, but I think I'd be cute. ^^;;; Ok, I've probably said too much, but anyways, keep up the great work!

That was Hot!! Kudos, I love Bikes, Harley's are my favorite and that was ................. WOW {Runs off and takes her bike for ride}

Karen: Tristan and Seto... who knew?
LD: Wow, that was intense! Me like! A LOT!
Karen: I don't think I'll ever look at a motorcycle the same waain ain either.
LD: Damn, and I really wanted to get one too.
Karen: * pointedly ignoring LD * I ealleally excited for the Ryou/Bakura one. They are my favorite couple!
LD: I can't wait to see what happens when Malik comes back!
Karen: These are fun! I can't wait until the next one!