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for Millenium Gold: The seX Philes

by KamuiShirou

person Yami Czarina
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! That was your HOTTEST effort, ever, and you know I usually bypass the het stuff, but that triple penetration was too.... GAHHHHHHHHHHHH! Okay, you know all your readers are now totally hot bothbothered, ROFL! Um, me, too! I'm SO glad you had the watchers get it on, too, though I would have liked more detail on that as well. Thanks for, um, a fantastic ride, hareta!
person sailorbowser
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I've been reading Millenium Gold since the very beginning, and even though I haven't posted a review for each chapter, I have enjoyed them. Still, it saddened me some to read your most recent chapter, and the finalization of the break-up between Mai and Joey. I understand that it was your decision what would happen, it's just that Mai and Joey are my favorite het couple in Yu-Gi-Oh. Still, the sex was great. Keep up the good work.
person Kelsey
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.

These are ALL so GOOD!

My favorite is Mai/Diamond/Sunni!Yeah!

Great job!
person kiyu
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well aren't they a bunch of horny men lol good job keep at it
person Li
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ah damn that was hot. hehehe.. but is bakura disappointed that he didn't get to have a taste of joey? I thought Joey would be the first person that Bakura would pounce on.. but instead Yami got to suck off Joey first.. .. =) but that was hot nonetheless. GREAT job!!
person Suni
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! The Millenium Gold company idea is both brilliant and original. So I just have a writer's redundancy qualm: why is it that after each male character has fingers placed in their entrance, they make a noise to which their lover responds with concern, resulting in a remark from the customer to the effect of "It just feels strange"? True, it probably feels strange for every virgin, but I'm not sure if every character would say the same thing. I've almost come to expect it. Regardless, this is a purely enjoyable fic! Keep writing, please!
person stormy
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY MOTHER FUCKING GOD! I LOVED IT CONTINUE! *moans* you have to
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. WOW! Damn, Keysha!! I really think you outdone yourself!! Wonderful! So, Mai has let go. Wow. I eagerly await the next phile. Maybe Mai can come back again....Hmmm??

Lady Elfskye
person DracOnyx
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, *claps loudly* that is one lesson that a lot of people need to learn . . . how to say goodbye and let go of something. This was an absolutely wonderful phile . . . it defintly gains a slot on my fav philes list. Thank you for such a great read, and I hope you continue.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: GODS! Why does the kid have to be home today?!?! *eyes wife*
YD: I need a nap! *thinks about hubby lying down in bedroom*
DD: Married life is good, doll.
YD: Next thing to perfect!

DD&YD: LOVE YA!!