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for "Toy Series"

by astracindel

person HellChild
schedule April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can u write another chapter? about yami and yugi and...erm....'toys'? sorry but i have no shame!
person KamuiShirou
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was funny as hell!! I could almost see poor Joey struggling,then blurting his secret out like that. I liked this story a great deal. Are ya gonna update?
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: OMG that was hysterical!
Karen: I cannot believe you actually wrote that. I would be blushing ten shades of red if I ever tried to put that...um...situation into words.
LD: That is why I am the write. Oh, hehehe, kinky Yugi! I just loved this. It was too great!
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aww, that is SO cute! write more, write more! Please write more? It was just adorable!
Bai!
person KK^_^
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I reeeeaalllly liked it. Maybe I'm just demented, but that was cool. And bowling is not as lame as you think. I happen to like bowling, thank you. Maybe it wasn't your idea, but you wrote it well. Kudos!
person EscaChick
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wheehoo! That was funny as hell! ^____^ Write s'more! I could always enjoy a good laugh once in ile,ile, and your fiction seems to do the trick! ^____^

EscaChick