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for Engulfed in Darkness

by Ravenx

schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! you only have 59 reviews for this fic out of *goes to check* 2255 hits that the story has gotten. at least i have an excuse for not reviewing. my comp was being a bitch as usual, so that means no reviewing for me. anyway, i absolutely love this fic! anything with vampires and yaoiness is great in my eyes. and the fact that it's about one of my fav anime shows makes it especially great! lovely chapter as usual but such an evil cliffie!! tell me you do not plan on letting Raia be born in that yucky cell, do you? and joey! he needs medical attention now! who knows what kind of diseases he could be being exposed to. we need him to be strong and healthy so that he can give seto another boy!! poor yugi, he probably feels so helpless because he cant do anything but hope that their mates make it in time. And please, please dont tell me that Ryou is to be pegasus's little fucktoy. not that i have anything against him. i just think that the thought him taking Ryou is just plain wrong. *shudders* hurry and update soon! i cant wait to read what happens next!
person Sushi
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait for you to write more. I really hope you update soon. Please do email me when you update at DarkFireFairy76@aol.com. Thank you. =D
person jadedkatrina
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story and I'm loving it. I can't wait to see what will happen and will Bakura finally take Ryou as his mate

But please, please email me when you are updating/updated the story... email is jadedkatrina@yahoo.com...

Thanks and update soon

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina
person Ravena Night
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the most awesome story!! i hope ryu gets rescued, but cruel enough i hope he gets raped and Bakura dishes out some sweet revenge. Ryu fans pls don't kill me ^^;;
person Lady Shinigami
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers, dances in circles, sings to tune of 'Happy Birthday' song* Merry Christmas to me! Merry Christmas to me!! Merry Christmas to meeeeeeeeeee!!

So what is it with everybody making Pegasus the enemy anyway? Is it just because he's an easy target? I mean, every AU I read that involves some evil enemy almost always makes that entity Mister Crawford. I just wrote a story and I found it simple to make him a protagonist. Not that I really CARE, because he IS kind of weird, but I was just wondering.

Ahhhhh!! Malik can't have his baby in a nasty DUNGEON!! It's not SANITARY!! And Joey seriously needs medical attention, I can tell! Poor Yugi needs some help with his friends, but Ryou's waiting to be turned into a whore! This is why the Majestics need to come in and KICK SOME ASS!! I can't wait for the reunion--I bet it's going to be all cute and mushy and full of sweet concern that I'd never be able to expect from a man in real life!


~LS
person Ree
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad, but u have a spelling error or 2 (u used attach instead of attack), and can u please have more romance in the next ch?
person crazychic2188
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow I luv ur story hurry update I wanna Know what happens lol
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH!!! That cliffy was worse than the last one!!! ::cries:: is Malik gonna have the baby before Marik gets there? Is Ryou gonna get raped by the ungly pile of nastiness named Pegasus? I'm gonna go nuts!!!! @_@
person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You love giving us cliffhangers don't you?!?! I want to know if they're gonna make it in time!!!! Not fair!!!!! Excellent battle description though. Very well written chapter. ^-^ I'd like to know when you update, as I don't come on every day to check on all the fics I read!
person Chelsey
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry havent reviwed in a while....
anyways love the story........
i was just wondering who was the spy and was he human or vamp?
AWESOME!! what more can i say?.......um....UPDATE AND FAST!!!
love ya