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for Engulfed in Darkness

by Ravenx

person jadedkatrina
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Chappie... the baby was just so precious and the way Bakura
seemed to soften (even just the slightest bit) towards him is great...
Hopefully this is a clue to what is to come... and will Joey and Seto finally
have become pregnant... anyways... update soon

gotta go

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina
person Gaia
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I love stories with vampires! Please update as soon as you can. Bye.
person Patusca
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Pegasus is dead finally ^_^ (I hate him)
Please update as soon as you can.
Bye.
person Joy
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They are save!!! Good...and a beautiful baby that Malik have. Please update soon...Ja ne.
person Jadej.j
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
glad everyone safe I hope that Seto and Jou will have a second child as well as Ryou and Bakura have their first... :D Hope to read a new chapter soon

ya can e-mail me if you wish
person Deathbalce
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey your storyis REALLY cool Im looking forward to sex between Bakura and Ryou ^_^
person Natalie (Natz)
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo Goooood......**DROOL!!!!** This has to be the best story ever!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! ::hugs her yami-sama plushie close::
person Camille
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So when are Ryo and Bakura going to really get together? I am enjoying this!
person Darkchan
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is a step above the usual things poster here. *grins* I actully really like the way this is going... and Bakura and Ryou didn't have sex as soon as they set eyes on each other, which is always a plus. *grins*
person Jhon Doe
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man! This story is totally awesome! Please keep writing. I Think the story is really good and imaginative. You are really articulate in your writing. I can't wait to read what happens next.