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for Engulfed in Darkness

by Ravenx

person cookiedough
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww there all safe now! yay ^^. i just have one question. what would happen if a demon or something raped yugi, joey, or malik? or can that just not happen cuz they have mates?
person Lady Shinigami
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers and swoons* SQUEE-ness!! Oh, dear sweet mother of broccoli, you have no idea what that did to my romantic side. The horrible event turned out happily ever after, the Majestics were all sweet and cooey (Is that even a word? Well it is now! ^_~) when they rescued their frightened mates/slave, and the baby was born safe and healthy! Whew, that messed me up! It was like getting high, only in a way that my parents would be more likely to approve of.

Post soon!!


~LS
person Ree
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins* cute
person Ravena Night
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry about earlier comment *punishes self horribly* i'll be sure to refrain from such cruel comments in the future. anyway onto review. wOOt ryou's okay and him and barkura have DEFINATELY hooked up by now. can't wait till next chapter ^^ ja ne
person Sushi
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely thing to come home to. I love this chapter too. Keep up the great work. =D
person Horizont
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So nice, so fluffy! ^^;;
Well... to be honest, this isn't the kind of story I usually read so that's why I'm especially happy that I did ead it nevertheless! ^_^x
I'm not that much into m-peg and vampires, but your story is simply wonderful!
I dunno if it was said already but Hikau doesn't mean light, it means sth like, um, sparkling, I guess, while Hikari means light. ^^;; Sry, couldn't help myself. :P

Um, I hope to ead the next chapter soon!
Ciao-ciao!

~Horizont
person Devilgirl255
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say,this is a great story.I can't stop reading.
I love Yugioh and vampires.And this story has it all.
I really like all the familly's.The kids are great.
I hope to read more of your work.You make great story''s
person Sarah Costa
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for send me the email. Great chapter!!! And Bakura killing Pegasus was great. Keep up the great work. Please update soon. Send me email to let me now when. Thank you. Ja ne.
person Juuni
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...great, just great! Pegasus been kill was great ( I don't like Pegasus). And the baby...wow. Please update soon and send me the email to let me know when please. Ja ne.
person Elys
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it i love it i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you must right more!!!!!!!!!! ummm.........*blushes* ummmmmm.....aaaaaaa......well......ummmmm......could..you maybe....ummmmmm...well you know....in the next chapter...umm..maybe a lemon between Ryou and Bakura? *runs away, hiddes* update soon. kk?
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